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A Blue Ribbon

I didn't take my umbrella, assuming the weather wouldn't respond with a whiplash, and on coarse sand I trudge, not thinking of a cloudburst to induce fear and suddenly bash. My grip on this balloon string has the strength of a cord, in case those clouds belch and belie... luckily its rapid ascent is not beclouded, and the flight's climax holds my attention to excite me. Floating balloon, don't let me off this cloud nine, keep going further up until you are set free, and that cloudburst, drunken with sunshine, will not hinder your enthusiasm and make you bleary. Slowly come down, and I will catch you blithely, as you bob, boasting a new win with a deflating burp, crashing in my folded arms, to snuggle you contentedly... here's a blue ribbon, weary balloon, for all the mirth. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 7/19/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:12:00 PM
What a very very interesting presentation. Very unique. A big congrats to you, Andrew!
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:42:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest Andrew >> James
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest..I enjoyed the trip! BG
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Date: 11/6/2009 5:21:00 PM
nice, good one
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:38:00 AM
I am so pleased to be reading all these outstanding poems today. I thank you for sharing yours with us today Andrew. Have a wonderful weekend and may you gain inspiration as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2009 10:49:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Love the metaphoric use here. Keep writing. Sara
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