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A Blue Bird Watching the Sad People

Sky Deep blue Blue birds fly Through endless light Watching the people Rushing around their lives Never noticing beauty Only seeing unhappy lives They should look they should see what they miss See the beauty of the world before them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/30/2008 7:55:00 PM
This is a wonderful etheree. The imagery is vivid. The sentiment is truth. We do miss a lot, for all our worries. Excellent write! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your work. Happy New Year! Love, Robin
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Date: 12/16/2008 6:27:00 AM
This is a beautiful write. Love the form and the flow of the poem. You captured the sky, and the unhappiness very well.
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