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A Blow To the Heart

She crys out in pain No one there to comfort her She suffers alone By: Misty Leccese © June 17, 2009

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/10/2010 10:52:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry here at PoetrySoup this year Misty. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2010 2:46:00 PM

I like this one too. (write "cries")

Kelli Egloff-Metzgar

Date: 6/18/2009 4:59:00 PM

Thank you for the beautiful comment! I normally do not get much out of a haiku, but this is absolutely full of feelings, I too, have felt this way. Love it! Kelli

James Fraser

Date: 6/17/2009 10:58:00 AM

Sad Senryu, nicely written>>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/17/2009 10:04:00 AM

There's an old saying: "Laugh and the world laughs with you; cry and you cry alone." It surely does seem that way sometimes, Misty. This is so sad but profoundly beautiful! Love, Carolyn