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A Blitz Attempt

Someone into mood Wave your flag Wave it to someone Someone in need Someone will smile Smile back Smile for a while While you sleep While you work Work a little each day Work toward peace Peace with coexistence Peace and gentle kindness Kindness to yourself Kindness to your pet Pet the sand with your toes Pet someone close Close to you and me Close to the Lord Lord Have mercy Lord this is long Long as in forever Long you are Are you still with me Are we still doing this This is tedious but This I will finish for you You are worth it You deserve attention Attention to detail Attention and time Time is valuable Time has a limit Limit your barriers Limit your excuse Excuse yourself Excuse those around Around your world Around your head Head for growth Head for change Change your perspective Change your mind Mind your manners Mind the weather Weather the storm Weather the mood Mood of all of it Mood you made Made; It! :)

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Date: 6/7/2016 2:28:00 PM
Fabulous blitz I have never tried this form i think you blitzed it Lukas!:-) hugs jan xx7
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 6/7/2016 9:03:00 PM
:) Thanks JAN! I was about to self diagnose ADHD halfway through lol. It is best free writing in the moment for me but not particularly my favorite.
Date: 5/29/2016 7:26:00 PM
Thanks, I'm pleased you like it. Take care.
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Date: 5/28/2016 1:19:00 AM
Way to go! You rocked the Blitz!
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Date: 5/27/2016 4:29:00 PM
This one really made me smile Lukas. It was humorous and a fun read with a good message to it. Very cleverly done. I like a poem that has a message and this said something. Nice job. A seven from me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/27/2016 11:14:00 AM
This blitz had some character in it, with the sprinklings of humor in the middle: "Are we still doing this This is tedious" ... nicely done, Lukas! Blitz are very fun, in my opinion.
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