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A Bitter Cup

How fine the lines 'twixt love's traits From sweet embrace to darkest thought, A cruel harbinger, fickle fate In whose grip I am now caught. My feelings, there on display My racing heart in love, delighted! Yet no lovers kiss came my way, Alas my love went unrequited. Love was toying with my mind Causing havoc, oh the pain, Love, why art thou so unkind What of my heart will still remain. A heart aflame cast the spell And sent my soul skywards, flying, Then burned my wings, to earth I fell, Just charred remains lay now, crying. I have known the exultant feelings, Love's potent brew, I have supped, Only to have my heart sent reeling And left to drain love's bitter cup. Entry for Writing Challenge 1, August 2019 - Just Write - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart.8/8/2019. Placed=1st.

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Date: 8/15/2019 7:51:00 AM
the emotions flow through every stanza, a heartfelt poem Gary! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/15/2019 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Jan. :)
Date: 8/14/2019 4:19:00 PM
This is excellent Gary, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/14/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thank you John. :)
Date: 8/13/2019 1:16:00 PM
Gary, I see why this wonderful poem was awarded first place. This is wonderfully expressed and so deserving! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 8/13/2019 1:39:00 PM
How kind Connie, thank you. :)
Date: 8/12/2019 9:50:00 PM
This started out GOOD and then kept getting better and better as each word drew me further in. Congrats and a WOW from me ... CayCay
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Date: 8/13/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you CayCay. :)
Date: 8/12/2019 7:24:00 PM
Gary congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent write
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/13/2019 4:54:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart. :)
Date: 8/12/2019 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations Gary on your winning poem.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/12/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. :)
Date: 8/12/2019 6:02:00 PM
love this, congrats on your well deserved win! :)-luloo
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/12/2019 6:08:00 PM
Thank you luloo. :)
Date: 8/4/2019 11:43:00 AM
This Is a Masterpiece Bravo...........
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/4/2019 11:49:00 AM
How kind Jerry, thank you. :)

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