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A Bit of Joy

Her tongue drips silver Calling children of all ages Walk in the spring brook Soft pebbles tickle Urban woes begin to fade A small interlude

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/26/2009 8:28:00 PM

My Dearest LOVE Barbara,what a great set YOU have YOU are mastering the Senryu very Good Xliamp LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/24/2009 4:24:00 PM

Love the first line! Wow, your writing is getting more brilliant with each new one! Simply awesome! Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/24/2009 3:32:00 PM

Barbara Great feel to this mood changing poem well done! Laura :)

Brian Strand

Date: 5/24/2009 12:50:00 AM

You poem is also BG one for my favourites..Rgds Brian & thanks for your very welcome comments.

Jessica K

Date: 5/23/2009 9:45:00 PM

What a pretty image that must be....great write -Jessica

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/23/2009 5:51:00 PM

This is a bit of Joy BG! Nice and strong images. Thanks for the comments. Nate

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2009 3:29:00 PM

Very lovely image of people escaping the harsh realities of city life to enjoy a "Walk in the spring brook." It may be "a small interlude," but these are the magical moments we remember and treasure. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/23/2009 3:28:00 PM

Urban woes begin to fade....that line caught me..gave me the impression of someone who has left one life behind and embarking on another...love that second stanza...this is well done.