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A Bird's First Flight

P Y O R ET new wings carry you soft breeze favours first flutter floating through the blue on these wings of poetry I enter your paradise (2nd August, 2016)

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Joseph May

Date: 4/23/2017 10:30:00 AM

Beautifully penned Jo...A7

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 8:59:00 AM

A 7 for your creativity, Jo! Such a lovely poem! Now I'll have to grow me wings:) Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2016 7:36:00 AM

Nicely done, congratulations Jo...

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2016 11:07:00 PM

Hi Jo, I enjoyed the imagery as well as well your creativity .Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/4/2016 10:42:00 PM

Jo, congratulations on your placement in the contest. I love the imagery in your nature Tanka. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 5:38:00 PM

Wish this one had gotten higher. i still love it. Congrats on the winner list

Lu Loo

Date: 8/4/2016 4:43:00 PM

a lovely tanka sweet Jo, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2016 6:12:00 AM

I agree with Caycay, VERY creative. i loved it.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/2/2016 9:19:00 PM

Lovely, Jo - creative presentation, too! CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 8/2/2016 1:04:00 PM

wonderful tanka, Jo,

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2016 12:39:00 PM

ohh, you soar through this delightful tanka, jo... great last line!..huggs

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/2/2016 11:18:00 AM

My wings still have problems with updrafts. Excellent poetry Jo. High marks from me!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2016 8:52:00 AM

- So beautifully described, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 8/2/2016 8:36:00 AM

Love this simple but full of bird symbolism poem; also how you put the poetry word in the v bird formation!:)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/2/2016 8:35:00 AM

Just wonderful, looks like you've mastered the Tanka. Your poetry is certainly taking flight, gaining momentum, you deserve even more readers, this is poetry in motion. A7

John Lawless

Date: 8/2/2016 8:25:00 AM

AH, soaring on the wings of poetry....