A Big Catch

a big catch--- in the spider's web the full moon

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2012 6:44:00 AM

hey check it out. Debs did a poem on you.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/20/2012 6:37:00 PM

Good short poem here. Intresting images. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/20/2012 7:54:00 AM

Fantastic Haiku! no more to say.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 10:55:00 AM

I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Kash. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/16/2012 10:43:00 PM

The full moon with an appearance of being trapped in a spider's web would make for a very fascinating photograph. Good write Kash.

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/15/2012 3:14:00 PM

Come on out of the dark corner, the spider said to Little Jack Horner. The moonshine's sparkling in your eyes. Come on out and try my pies. Don't stick in your thumb, you shouldn't be so dumb. I've got cherry and apple, but not plumb.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2012 10:23:00 AM

wow Kash.. a dynamic visual.. spiders have all the fun..now catching the moon too.. great imagery luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2012 7:29:00 AM

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2012 6:37:00 AM

Hi, mr. Haikuking.....excellent!!!!! - // huggs :)Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2012 2:58:00 AM

finally, another work that is beyond amazing, kashi... bring it on!!..:) huggs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2012 2:58:00 AM

ohh, manila still drizzling.. i miss my moongazing!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 8:07:00 PM

aha, here is a new one for me to comment to on my way off here tonight. I think you may have posted this elsewhere? I think I remember it and I love it!

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/14/2012 5:46:00 PM

love this!!! excellent haiku, and so clever, dear Kash!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2012 4:12:00 PM

Whoa!...Poor big catch..Getting a head start on upcoming Halloween..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for stopping by...Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2012 12:47:00 PM

This is a fabulous write my friend! You sure can write these Haiku! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 8/14/2012 12:12:00 PM

Kash, just love your haiku's, ..David