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A Bicycle In the Wind

On a bicycle, freedom's flight Pedaling 'cross the horizon Reflections of blue in my sight With dreams of lassoing the sun A girl's spinning wheels leave the ground On a bicycle, freedom's flight O'er the treetops without a sound Veils of darkness fall out of sight Wishing in the morning star's light Bright tomorrows, I wait to greet On a bicycle, freedom's flight My pink beauty with flowered seat Dark days return and tides do rise Still, memories soothe in the night Two wheels like wings of butterflies On a bicycle, freedom's flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/10/2013 8:16:00 AM
Fantastic ride, this one made me think of the bicycle scene in ET. Well done.
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:50:00 PM
Rhonda, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:27:00 AM
What a lovely memory! Congratulations, Rhonda!!
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:34:00 AM
congrats Rhonda, love the imagery in this a wonderful winner. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:38:00 AM
i like the "pink beauty with flowered seat" - very descriptive! congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:23:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda love the start and end of this (and of course the middle) ha ha
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Date: 5/18/2012 12:46:00 AM
Very nice... I guess boys & girls are kinda the same... ;-) Terry
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:13:00 PM
With your flowered seat and butterfly wheels....you took the cake. A fairy tale bike ride...even the 2 guy judges liked it...and I picked on them for it too! hahah. Congrats Rhonda. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:13:00 PM
With your flowered seat and butterfly wheels....you took the cake. A fairy tale bike ride...even the 2 guy judges liked it...and I picked on them for it too! hahah. Congrats Rhonda. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:06:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 6:49:00 PM
Very nice poem,I love the imagery...xoxoxo
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