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A Better World

Soaring into the blue skies, look down The grey myriad of life's endless mysteries Dreams lost in a sea of deceit Seeds of doubt sown, look around It's too late, there's no saving grace here A new world, let's build today, now Scribbled notes, capricious thoughts A box of crayons and rekindled hopes A world where you and I can tell the difference Between forgiving smiles and constant fears Stubborn pretence and true acceptance And where the colours are infinite and beyond A closet of cold disguises and fickle masks is no closet of ours Let's make way for happier surprises then And bring that smile back on your face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/1/2015 12:09:00 PM
I liked your inner better world and idealistic great expectations.We may meet in our mutual verses looking for an acceptable world :”Let's make way for happier surprises then And bring that smile back on your face”. By the way :What is the theme of your project? Both English theme and theme of life for the future? Best regards.
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Suman Reddy
Date: 5/13/2016 5:04:00 AM
Thanks for your feedback. I don't have a specific theme. My style is mostly dark imagery with an escapist feel to it.
Date: 2/14/2015 12:09:00 AM
Suman, thank you for sharing another deep write, this one different and I enjoyed. SKAT
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Suman Reddy
Date: 2/20/2015 12:41:00 AM
They're deep and dark, aren't they? I'll make the next one a little happier :)

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