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A Better Me

A Better Me The creator of light is my virtue In him I shall breathe again My faults are not judged For they are only looked upon as hope Not as a line of communication for the wicked To lift themselves up to see me fall The struggles of my desire overcame me But they do not define me My creator does not see my faults And what I can not be But what I can be A better me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/22/2022 9:23:00 PM
Vibrant innocence, with love in resonance
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Date: 3/18/2021 3:16:00 PM
The beginning of wisdom.;0)
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:00:00 PM
Words of truth indeed. Good poem. - JH
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Date: 6/30/2012 5:58:00 PM
How uplifting! Yes, we go from glory to glory. We change for the better. We can be assured of that. Good write. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 6/30/2012 4:06:00 PM
Good - we can always be better...so true. - oxox Anne-Lise
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