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A Beautiful Woman

A BEAUTIFUL WOMAN Her face was a constellation of perfections She was ravishing; beautiful beyond condemnation. Her voice was like many water Yet, it's coo whenever she sputtered. Her gait was just so alluring No wonder men couldn't help but kept gazing. She trod on her pathway like a goddess - This woman I saw was priceless. Even her dance step sent signals to heavenly bodies The immortals were mesmerized - she was more than a novice. The flexibility of her body was as a swift wind It moved so fast, it could not be filmed. When she sang, it was like that of an angel Kingdoms let loosed: heaven, earth and hell In her eyes, you'd see paradise In her world, great men and women did arise There was ample concinnity in her kingdom Everything was cloudless, no entrenchment of freedom She also spoke with authority and with great audacity Owning to her greatness, she created a brawny fraternity Loosed men and women longed to have her by their side 'Sorry, I'm not your type' she did chide They tried to restrain, but they were so much in love Her being angry at them only waxed their hearts together in her glove Men of great status came to have her They were with their luxuries - they came from afar The splendour of her beauty got them sprawling to the floor The radiance of her look made their visions blur In her, greatness was defined There are so many traits of hers which can't be outlined She kept her statute; she was a woman of virtue Her works were known, they reached their plateau Of a truth, this woman is a goddess And this makes me remember the game of chess At the end, the king and queen are brought to rear So also is this woman I saw. Her name is Nigeria.

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Date: 1/8/2016 8:46:00 PM
LOVE THE POEM
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Date: 9/11/2014 3:25:00 PM
Jimmy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/11/2014 7:09:00 AM
beautifully crafted poem with great imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Jimmy Godwin
Date: 9/11/2014 8:49:00 AM
Awww! Thanks dear
Date: 9/11/2014 4:38:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jimmy - I choose your first lovely written poen - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jimmy Godwin
Date: 9/11/2014 4:46:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome and encouragememt. I'm so pleased. Thanks.
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Date: 9/11/2014 4:44:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome and encouragememt. I'm so pleased. Thanks.

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