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A Beautiful Truth

I listened as you spoke a beautiful truth in my soul I said amen lovers love, when all seems lost poets capture it with their pen When I'm filled with sadness and my heart feels deaf words are magic that you bring these soundless words on a page are what cause my heart to sing I breathe your unseen breaths my lungs filled with air you cradle me in your dreams silver filling the night sky love flowing to me in streams You think you dance alone on a pure white stage until you're offered a hand then the magic comes alive the stage is yours to command 6 syllables line one 5 syllables line two Line 3 to five 7 syllables Line 3 and 5 are rhyming

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Date: 3/16/2014 11:32:00 AM
Amen... Loving ths beautiful write. & bless you for commenting in many poems i've read here on the soup..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/16/2014 12:08:00 PM
It is my pleasure Patrick. Thanks for your thoughtful visit.
Date: 3/12/2014 12:37:00 AM
Dear Richard: Lovely this love affair! Leon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Leon.
Date: 3/9/2014 7:59:00 PM
Very creative Rick, and a stunning love poem too, I way behind in the soup, will take some catching up , but I will. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Richard, your visits are always appreciated.
Date: 3/9/2014 4:54:00 AM
Amazing, Rick! You have penned a perfect romance, a slow dance between two hearts.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2014 9:05:00 AM
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Date: 3/4/2014 12:34:00 PM
WOW! This has to be true love and that would be the beautiful truth. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 12:18:00 AM
Thanks Lucilla.
Date: 3/3/2014 10:16:00 PM
Ahhhh...perfect love poem....:-) :-) :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/4/2014 7:22:00 AM
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Date: 3/3/2014 8:08:00 AM
Ah, the "You complete me" line in that Jerry Maguire movie resounds from this. Very, very touching.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2014 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Drake, now you saying this brings Austen Powers and Mini Me to mind.
Date: 3/2/2014 10:51:00 PM
A pride to every poet,a thrust that propels forward,a bouyancy that defies gravity;I'm happy to read this this morning and in it is your greatness.Kudos Richard,the stage is truly ours.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2014 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Kayod5, I would be happy to share a stage with you any time my friend.
Date: 3/2/2014 6:14:00 PM
Richard , this is another outstanding work by someone who is so talented and its none other than you. This bird came here to visit you. What a lovely write....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 7:29:00 PM
Red! Your back! I have missed your visits. So nice to see you. Hugs Rick.
Date: 3/2/2014 3:45:00 PM
A beautiful poem and a beautiful thing...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 5:29:00 PM
Thanks Scott.
Date: 3/2/2014 3:18:00 PM
To be offered a hand when one feel to be dancing alone..That is a beautiful feeling..Knowing somebody cares.Wowzer..Lovely!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, what a lovely comment.
Date: 3/2/2014 2:44:00 PM
Richard. Is this a new form???? WOW! Is it? Oh my....how beautiful. But honestly...the content...oh goodness gracious me. Absolutely heavenly! Great JOB! Hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/2/2014 3:48:00 PM
Richard....your last name.....it's so...romantic. Honestly.....just go with that....or some version of it....the Lamoureux.....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 3:38:00 PM
Yes it is, I had to keep working it to find a proper flow. I'm so pleased you like it. Any suggestions for a name?
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/2/2014 2:46:00 PM
Cradled in dreams....how....dreamy! ;) Oh...I read it again...I know I'll read this one many many times, Richard...Beautiful! To my favs.....
Date: 3/2/2014 12:38:00 PM
beautifully written brought tears to my eyes Jan x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2014 12:40:00 PM
Wow, what a great compliment. You are most kind.

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