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A Soul Journeys Home

Soaring through the galaxies my soul takes flight like a shooting star it explodes into the air Illuminating it like fireflies in the night as the knight of darkness recedes into despair. Hypnotic sounds of swirling gases like heavenly organs fail to placate the quivering of my soul as Heaven bound it clings to the bell -like voices of angels guiding it home. As a drowning man grasps at a straw my soul reaches out then close to the gates of Heaven is encircled in prisms of light . Finally on a crimson tide it's borne away to Paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/2/2009 3:14:00 AM
Margaret this is truly a very descriptive and expressive piece. Congratulations on being featured this week. Sara
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Date: 8/1/2009 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/28/2009 3:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Meg. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 8:47:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/27/2009 12:40:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Meg.RgdsBrian
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Date: 7/26/2009 5:46:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery and a lot of depth for the reader to enjoy. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Have a good week. Karen
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Date: 2/26/2009 12:31:00 PM
Nice concept. Work on the "to rhyme or not to rhyme question-"air/despair" causes the reader to want more rhyme. Light & Love Debbie
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