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A Sandy Walk

Along the shore young lovers walk Beneath a cobalt blue sky with some stalks Creamy white sand gushes between their toes as calm waves ripple In the morning of a dew. IN the haze of whispers the winds strayed past due flaming the ground of final goodbyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/3/2013 1:13:00 PM
wow.. amazing... and deep...Linda
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Date: 9/6/2011 7:28:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Rora. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:55:00 AM
lovely piece.
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