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A Recalling Woo

Divorce me Marry my dreams I dreamt I was loving you for eternity. I know your beauty is a hoax I don't mind falling a million time indeed As far as I end up giving a toss That forever we shall swim in love streams. Love is blind But your beauty won't let me pretend to be Love hurt like knife But the weather of my love is too hot for that indeed. Anything good comes with a price I want the best in you, I will give it a fight. You ask me if I can die for love I say if we will be buried together I have no choice. Do you still want to leave my love Go with my dreams at once. Yes, I will die happily when you are with my all I shall be waiting at the other side To continue wooing you to fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 7:58:00 AM
A warm applause to you Victor Earnest, for having your work featured in the Home Page for PS! Regards, Teddy.
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Date: 7/21/2014 10:49:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Victor :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/18/2014 10:25:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Victor. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:46:00 PM
Victor, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:09:00 AM
the story of love... :) intriguing at some points yet you deliver a passion so high in here!!! WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I am Olive :) I have been here in poetrysoup since 2012, allow me to say that I have allot of fun here and learning.. :) as you go around not only are you will be captivated by the poems, but you will be blessed with the wonderful people who are here!!! receive my warmest welcome here!!! :D God bless you.. :)!
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