Get Your Premium Membership

A History of One Day

A HISTORY OF ONE DAY Seven and the hated buzz assaults my ears, And in a half-hour I am in metro-hell crowded. In a glass box, with a thousand pole-hangers loaded, Each pretending not to see the others. Then out up the steps of Mauthausen and push Into an open freezer of darkness and murk, Dodging ice-patches where treachery might lurk, Over the bridge cowering from traffic’s rush. Expending energy all day in voice and limb, The school is warm and noisy with youth lively Eroding my scant patience until five, when I tidy Up their mess gratefully. I’ve had it to the brim. Someone else, anyone else, sends them to doting parents To be recharged and re-armed for tomorrow’s erosive assault on me. Change clothes, cigarette and a small coffee, Then zombie-like I fall into the crowd across the bridge, spent. Looking sideways at the ducks in the dark river - bliss! - Two or three eiders and a mallard, playing carefree, Scuttling freely about after crumbs under a fallen tree. The ducks are past now, and we plunge into the abyss - Down, down, as the chambers of Auschwitz, leading nowhere With the unseeing pole-thousand in our glass box like rats, And roar our weary way west to the suburban flats And flop into an armchair to watch the tv news there About nothing happening to no one in particular, this day - again. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Entered in FRANK H.’s Contest “A History Of One Day”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/12/2011 9:51:00 PM
ok, it just dawned on me. Do you mean being on the subway? Now it makes sense!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2011 9:50:00 PM
I'm sorry, but can you explain pole hangers to me. I think everyone knows what it is except me!! Excellent writing as always, Sydney!! Congrats on your great win.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/12/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest . Love, CarolSidney
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 10:41:00 AM
AGAIN SIDNEY,, congratulations in ANOTHER contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 8:57:00 AM
This was brilliant, Sidney.....you said what is true for so many, day in and day out. Congrats on a fine win!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 8:46:00 AM
An amazing write.Congrats on your win Sydney.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 7:13:00 AM
Never heard of an Eider til this poem. My hubby and I looked it up and found out how gorgeous there are!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 7:09:00 AM
That first stanza is stupendous, Syd. I love the expressions of pole hangers and not a one noticing the others! Congrats to you! Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 6:23:00 AM
what terrors time can bring large and small, how skillfully you bring us along with you, I can almost hear your labored breathing from the damn cigarettes! Wonderful write [I assume you speak of subways? trains..we would say strap-hangers..though many do grab the seats poled uprights] I t reminded me of the trains in London. In the US folks are a wee bit more friendly on public transport. CONGRAD's light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 12/10/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a day x
Login to Reply
Date: 11/20/2011 3:20:00 PM
I always enjoy your work Sidney. Good Luck in the contest. Tony
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things