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A Dark Day

A Dark Day Dark clouds loom. Spirits full of gloom Thoughts turn to doom. Together for years. Now, eyes full of tears. Anger in the voice, Leaving us with no choice. Accusations of blame. Nothing will be the same. Two hearts bleed, Today is a dark day indeed. Stephen Forcier copyright 10/8/08

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Date: 12/9/2008 9:16:00 PM
Very deep. I really enjoyed this poem
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Date: 11/30/2008 8:16:00 AM
Such a sad reflection. Nice use of rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/30/2008 6:00:00 AM
deeep poem, by the way if you become friends with alexz youll never forget in your mortal life just....... dont.
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Date: 11/29/2008 6:45:00 PM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the lines and the words. The rhyming pattern is wonderful. Welcome to Poetry Soup and great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 11/29/2008 3:51:00 PM
This is REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!!! Do you wanna be friends cause I think that you would like all of my poems if you just give them a chance!! I'm 16 years old and my name is Alexz ( It's really Alexandria/Alex). . . ^.^ Love Alexz
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