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Is this what has become of the youth? Whose thoughts are easily susceptible, And subtly swayed of its rectitude, Favoring the majority despite being ostensible. If liberty to choose is not wielded, Thinking the greater number is invariably right, Then it has already been decided, We are pawns who'd never see the light. Impetuous as it may seem, To be foolishly and fearlessly decisive; We'll grow out of youth... all agleam, And wake up in a world so complex and illusive. Yet we will forever be stuck at dawn, If this be still... as time wears on. - ALSL

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Date: 3/21/2016 9:22:00 PM
Alsa, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 2/29/2016 1:37:00 PM
Alsl,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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