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You and I

Alone to night just you and I Behind this veil of thick cold mist Captivating in this enchanted magical night Dancing in the blessed lovers rhythm Enveloped in the ultimate pleasure the world beyond Fervor in ecstasy in the contest > ABC poem about love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Edward Orozco
Date: 6/7/2013 11:32:00 PM
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Great piece!!! Well written- Edward
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 6/6/2013 2:22:00 AM
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its beautiful Manel :) i hope u are well. *hugs* mwaah
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/6/2013 9:44:00 PM
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i am partly Ok. Just a back ache. I use the lap top these days on my bed. Nothing serious. Old age. ha! ha! Thanks my love Thank for your concern visit. Hugs!
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Date: 6/5/2013 4:58:00 PM
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such passion in this one Manel, very much enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/6/2013 9:46:00 PM
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Thank you my dearest PD. I like you this way better
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/3/2013 5:40:00 PM
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NICELY done, Manel.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 8:17:00 PM
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Thank you dear Andrea
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/3/2013 11:21:00 AM
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That is beautifully expressed, God bless you both. LOve it. a 7>>>> Terry xo
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM
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thank you Therese.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 7:52:00 AM
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You are a true romantic! Well done.
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 11:46:00 AM
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thank you Richard
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/3/2013 4:36:00 AM
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- Hey my friend Manel. - This is beautiful!! - It will come high up on the winning list - Good luck! - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 4:42:00 AM
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Thank you my deaerest Anne.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/3/2013 4:07:00 AM
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Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM
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Thank you, my dearest Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/3/2013 12:58:00 AM
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Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/3/2013 4:43:00 AM
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Thank you my friend.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/2/2013 4:17:00 PM
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That is pure magic of a romantic verse!
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 6/2/2013 11:49:00 PM
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Thank you my friend Demetrios.

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