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First day of spring 2024...March 19 at 11:06 P.M. following. thin ice in birdbath biting wind cuts to the bone.... sun's up first spring day

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:28:00 PM

Yep, that ice is breaking up now. Yeah! Nice Haiku for spring, Sara. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/23/2024 7:18:00 AM

Yes, it seems like spring is definitely here with its warmth and awakening. Your visits add such a special touch. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2024 10:36:00 AM

- Early spring ... winter is not quite gone, Sara :) - Have a great weekend :) -

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2024 11:08:00 AM

It feels like winter is still here today, Anne-Lise. Damp, wet and cold. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/22/2024 8:26:00 AM

A great haiku dear Sara. Love the creative words you’ve artistically used here to describe a chilly scene. You’ve captured your first day of spring very poetically. We’ve had lots of rain of late but some sunny days as well :) Have a great weekend x

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2024 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Christina. Yes, spring came a little tad early something about leap year. LOL..Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2024 3:27:00 AM

We get sunshine but tepid warmth.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2024 5:27:00 AM

Victor, is the tepid warmth good or bad? Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/21/2024 5:46:00 PM

just a lovely Haiku, Sara K, with captivating imagery. Nicely done. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2024 5:26:00 AM

Sara B, thank you for your nice review of my work. The evening was okay. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/21/2024 1:55:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this lovely "thin ice" Haiku write. Pretty Picture. I have found spring like to sleep in... Have blessed day writing away................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/22/2024 5:16:00 AM

Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2024 8:06:00 AM

That is about it! I’m still cold…lol

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/21/2024 12:44:00 PM

Kim, it has warmed up this afternoon inside my home, but the computer thermometer says it is 47 degrees outside. I haven't been outside except to let the dog out and call her to stop rolling in something. LOL..Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2024 6:03:00 AM

Much enjoyed this welcome to spring you wrote, Sara. Every line a splendid image.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/21/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/20/2024 5:55:00 PM

Dear Sara, I love your wonderful Haiku. It is a beautiful reflection of the ending of Winter and the beginning of Spring. - Loved it, Sara! - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/21/2024 1:29:00 AM

Why, thank you, Daniel. Glad you loved it. Sara K