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Moon is My Muse

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Moon is My Muse

Luna in grandeur, skirts the heavens by night 
Her beauty reflects wholly on all within sight
While her crystalline brilliance expand the skies
Illuminating thoughts and dreams aspire  

She arrests admiring eyes that micmic stars
And softens hearts of the most stalwart of Bards
In the realm of dreamscape, an influential muse
Lighting many a pathway with the sun, her fuse

Mellow is her mood and soft be her touch
In calming silence she carries the torch
Through pitch black nights she stands watch
Stirring imaginings with emotions to match

Gently, she nudges the ebb and flow of tides
From granite pavillions on her chariot rides
~*~
02/26/13
Note:  For "Moon is My Muse" Contest

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Congratulations annalise....Donna

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:50:00 AM
    Annalise, beautifully done--Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:07:00 PM
    Congratualations on a great win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Annalise, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:03:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Annalise

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Anna congrats on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Beautiful Sonnet!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:33:00 AM
    beuatiful write Annalise...loved it....best wishes

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:21:00 PM
    'Gently, she nudges the ebb and flow of tides'...What a description!... What a gem of a sonnet you have written, Annalise...I also like your idea of the moon being female, like a goddess - Tim

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Annalise just beautiful. Very visual to the imagination. The grandeur lady of the night. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Thankyou for your kind comments, I have been ill lately that is why I haven't been visible , your poetry is among my favorites and love to read them when I have time, keepthe pen flowing my dear and you are in my wife's anour prayers Godbless Boband Sharon.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Wow! this one is great. Especially the last lines. They sum it all up so beautifully.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 11:58:00 PM
    wow, you are becoming a sonneteer with one like this, Annalise. This is just as lovely as can be!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Just lovely! I could picture either Artemis or Diana riding in her chariot across the night sky.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:49:00 PM
    I love the last line, granite pavillions on hr chariot rides Beauty upon beauty, great write Annalise, love this xxx

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:47:00 PM
    love this wonderful write, my friend x

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 3:14:00 PM
    beautiful and gracious poetry... love this

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 12:50:00 PM
    Oh, this sonnet is gorgeous, Annalise! I love the idea of the sun as the moon's fuse.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Yes Annalise I can see the moon is your muse luv, and don't worry time is a premium for us all so I appreciate it when I hear from you xx

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 5:12:00 AM
    Great work..Winning material in my book..Enjoyed reading about the moon from your point of view..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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