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' Missing the Old Days '

Life, Breath - Taken One leg gone Perished in deathbed Diabetes murdered Grandpa Benumbed by ill - gash's agony perforating - dulled Gold medal won after the day of his death reminds me of his only heart memoirs...

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/7/2011 8:34:00 AM

Sad story, gold lining tinged with a cloud, well expressed in an interesting form.

Cory Long

Date: 8/5/2011 7:15:00 AM

congrats on your win in the contest with this exceptional write cory

Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2011 10:57:00 AM

Many congratulations, Jun-jun : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2011 1:20:00 AM

yeahey, jun..heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/2/2011 1:00:00 AM

Thanks, jun-jun, for your kind words.Congrats..SJ

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 9:02:00 PM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol,jun-jun

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 9:01:00 PM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol,jun-jun

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/1/2011 8:46:00 PM

Powerful, jun-jun.! Much said in few words!

Don Johnson

Date: 8/1/2011 6:38:00 PM

Sad things do happen, sickness kills, great poem mate of Grandpa still, good on ya, Don

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/1/2011 6:29:00 PM

A winning congratulations! Caryl

Joseph Osita

Date: 8/1/2011 5:44:00 PM

Very nice! Congrats on your 2nd place win in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Jun-Jun. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2011 3:02:00 PM

congrats jun-jun on your spectacular second place win with this wonderful write luv.. a true treasure..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/30/2011 12:17:00 PM

I have never tried this form I think-- very interesting take on it-- and I have to agree, diabetes sure is a cruel disease-- I am sorry you lost your lolo to it-- your last line gives this such a bittersweet ending...

Dalila Agtani

Date: 7/30/2011 1:32:00 AM

Jun-Jun Now I need to read Fibonacci form! How have you been? The formatted form looks so nice and creative. Of course the content has deep meaning! Thank you for sharing. My warmest regards to you! Dalila

Tim B

Date: 7/29/2011 10:24:00 PM

Touching and emotional, a powerful write. Thanks for sharing.