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“ GOD … How I Appreciate The Complexities ! … “ I Appreciate The Intricate, Just-So, Subtleties The Intellectual Nuances and Imposed Perfunctories That Separates Our Minds, From The Minds Of Beasts … … Oh, The Ingeniousness of Thinking Abilities This Superconductor of Sanctioned-Sensitivities Where The Human Mind Can Reach, Celestial-Journeys Even Beyond Our Mental-Mortal Capacities Beyond … The Grasp of Dark and Grey Matter Beyond … A Storage Tank and Brain-Storm Gathered Beyond … Sweet Alice and A Mad-Hatter Beyond … ThunderDome, and What Happens In Latter Beyond … Neurons and A Neurotic-Mass Beyond … ‘We’ve Got Some Nerve-Ending’ Synapse And Just Like There’s More To See, Than What Cameras Snap There’s More To Our Minds, Than Biology Can Map How Could One Admire Computer-Technology And Not Marvel At Our Medula-Oblongata System-logy Our Minds, Are A Megaplex of Individualities A Mall of Momentous Ideals and Marble Column Libraries … We, Are Not Matrix, Nor Mere Routine-Machines We, Are Not Droids, nor Drones … We Can Live Our Dreams ‘ HE ’ Programmed ‘Choice’ into Us, And Gave Us Dignities So, “A Mind Is A Terrible Thing To Waste”, In Stupidities … We, Are Not Robotic-Puppets, But of Genetic-Construct … Dust, DNA-Stairway, 3-D, and Divine-Spark-Struck We Can Be Psychotic, Without Aware-Antibiotics and Self-Destruct But Note, That A ‘Thought’, Does Not Evolve, Without ‘An Instruct’ ( … and Guess What, Man-Maze … Really, Neither Did Us ! … ) … Oh, How I Appreciate the Concise Design (Like A Human Battery) Its Purpose, Possibilities and Activities, (even allows this Poetry) I Appreciate The Connections Affixed in Each of The Holy Spirit-Surgeries ( Ps. 139: 13-16 ) But Most Of All, I Appreciate Being Made … In YOUR Imagery … ( Gen. 1: 26, 27 )

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Date: 11/22/2009 3:31:00 PM
Wonderful title... magnificent poem from your creative pen, MoonBee... such a joy to read .. nice play on words... enjoyed... I am with u.. GO COWBOYS... but my team is the NY GIANTS.. as long as they stay at the top of the NFL East Division I am a happy poet... thankxxx for comments of enjoyment on my football poem.. e mail Carolyn Devonshire if u want to participate in a football poem we have started today... its in the works as I type... blessings.... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/22/2009 6:08:00 AM
Very well said!!!! great poem, take a look at my poem, Focus With A passion, love Simone
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Date: 11/21/2009 8:52:00 PM
I love the totality of this fine work, Lady. And especially the third stanza "beyond the Dark and Grey Matter" for so many are painted into that neat little politically correct box of the mind. For within the the Sacred center of ourselves, we have the same power that created the storage tank, why not go beyond that. Get into Love's higher locic, for God does have a project. Sincere, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:12:00 PM
love the MOSL! in stanza 5!...... good work! MoonBee! I feel a touch of 'Jamaican Soul' in this song! jimbo
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Date: 11/21/2009 12:43:00 PM
What a clever, techno-modern write, Moonbee! I loved the line about being programmed to make choices. It's so true! Very imaginative and totally original! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/21/2009 12:42:00 PM
Bravo, MoonBee! This is a simply amazing piece! You have shown a complex mind here. Wonderful! Hugs, Donna
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