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Limerick In My Pocket

In the following months to come Want to lose the weight off my bum Will go to the gym Will try to think thin But to toffees I will succumb

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 1/30/2013 1:09:00 AM

Nice one, I am really uneducated about so many forms, I don't even want to look at the list. I actually after reviewing, remember this one. Nice poem, you said bum,haha "english" humor and you used that near rhyme again, clever clever. Now I think I have exceeded the amount of comments I can give without being reported for stalking, thanks for sharing the wonderful poems.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/30/2013 7:02:00 AM

haha you missed one called white Tears, was watching the snow come down when i wrote it..Seren

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2013 3:13:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Debbie....Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2013 2:06:00 PM

Good taste to which to succumb..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 2:32:00 PM

thanks Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2013 11:30:00 PM

seren, I am seeing this one for the first time, and I have to say, you really did a nice job with your limerick. I really like it. Congrats for your win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/18/2013 2:32:00 PM

thank you Andrea

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/16/2013 5:26:00 PM

Well done,.. but to lose too much off there doesn't seem a good idea. Congrats, Seren. Have yourself a wonderful year!! Jag

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 5:46:00 PM

Thanks Jag ...Seren

Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2013 6:40:00 AM

congrats on your win Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 5:46:00 PM

thank you Joseph

Kash Poet

Date: 1/15/2013 10:42:00 AM

Good one Seren!Enjoyed the read.Congrats on your win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:16:00 PM

Thank you Kash...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 8:41:00 AM

Seren, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest. xox~pd

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:17:00 PM

Thank you PD ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/15/2013 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations Seren love this one, leave the toffees behind xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:17:00 PM

lol you wont eat then Mandy, you would rather a sausage roll....LOL

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/15/2013 5:51:00 AM

nice job! congrats on placing in the contest!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/15/2013 12:18:00 PM

Many thanks Ilene ....Seren

John Posey

Date: 1/6/2013 1:23:00 PM

Great limerick, friend. I wish you luck in the contest.... I like the looks of your portfolio... I will be sampling ocassionally... Jake

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/6/2013 6:59:00 PM

Hello Jake nice to see you here, thanks for commenting...Seren

Rollo West

Date: 1/1/2013 12:20:00 PM

Hi Seren, I am a sucker for Limericks, and this one I really love. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/1/2013 1:49:00 PM

hmmm you a toffee eater too rollo, you can keep yuour chocs, some thorntons toffee especially treacle and licquorice, yummy

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/1/2013 9:37:00 AM

Dear Seren, You should not throw away what you have …gained! Ha-ha. Lovely and refreshing writing. Thank for commenting on my poem: TIME ANEW. Happy New Year!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/1/2013 11:50:00 AM

nooo will not throw away, just diminish it slowly ...Seren