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' I Write Each Tear With a Song '

======================================================== “My pen drips of sorrow and on this paper, I write each tear” -A Rambling Poet 1 month of woe 4 weeks of sorrow 28 days of boredom 672 hours - hearts can't find freedom 40,320 minutes of missing 2,419,200 seconds of thinking 1 group of fools 54 friends who see you in wholes Countless infinite laughter and smiles 1 in glee - mirth faces in files 1 in quests and troubles 1 in silliness and foibles 1 in problems and conflicts 1 in smooth crimes and tricks 1 in life's battles “I LOVE YOU “, not just about the cackles I've said in countless times 3 words of truth - invaded my mind in rhymes Songs and episodes of our novel of amity Chapters nestled with emotions of gaiety... Now, I'm missing everything - right or wrong Memories reminisced - still, mind and heart are singing the “SONG “. ============================================================ *-*jun-jun villanueva *-*Just Write Contest *-*August 13, 2011

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Date: 8/18/2011 8:25:00 PM
this is wonderful writes, congrats!!!
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:32:00 AM
Brilliantly wrote out and well deserved winner jun-jun blessings Paul
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:42:00 PM
Coming back here jun-jun to congratulate you! Way to go for this uniquely written piece!
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:53:00 AM
whoo, jun.. a brief but rich shout-out of congrats on your glowing win before soup knocks me off.. awhhh! huggs :) :)
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:39:00 AM
Jun Congratulations on your poem honored presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:47:00 AM
A very unique piece jun-jun. Very well written. Congratulations
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Just Write" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jun-Jun
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:06:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on a sweet victory win with these tremendous words for the contest luv.. superbly written..luv..
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:49:00 PM
congrats on your win my friend cory
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:00:00 PM
What a very interesting take on Constance's words, jun-jun! I really like how you incorporated these numbers to a love-- sort of remind me of that song, Season of Love-- hmm I hope I remember that title right-- this sure is a bittersweet write--:) hope to see this in the winner's list!
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Date: 8/14/2011 12:03:00 AM
An amazing write jun jun...so beautifully written...best of luck in the contest...it really reads like a winner....smiles...chiquita
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