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- Haiku X 22 - Winter X 4 -

1. White silver crystals winter coat over a garden bench Summer dreams *** 2. Outside the window the virgin untouched purity the snow is here *** 3. Angels in the snow White crystals flashes The children excited *** 4. Blue gray clouds Yellow ring around the moon More snow coming 04.12.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Lester Cohen

Date: 3/4/2014 4:31:00 AM

Anne Lise, thank you for your welcoming message and your kind words about my initial haiku posted. I will participate as much as I can. Your haiku was very enjoyable to read, I'm living in Thailand at the moment and felt a cool breeze here as I read your 4 poems. Les Cohen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/4/2014 8:08:00 AM

- Pleased to hear some words from you and Thailand. -( I visited Thailand two years ago.....lovely land ) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/18/2013 9:58:00 AM

Beautiful sets of serial haiku worded with extreme beauty. Loved always, my beautiful friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/18/2013 11:12:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley

Date: 12/16/2013 3:03:00 PM

Wonderful image provoking old memories and creating new visions.Love your work A.L.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2013 3:05:00 PM

- Thanks for pleasant visit and nice comments Michael . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/10/2013 1:10:00 PM

I must admit that I really hadn't much appreciation for Haiku until I read these. They are so concise and marvelous in their descriptions--evoking strong feelings in my poetic soul. Thank you so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2013 1:12:00 PM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patrick Boyle

Date: 12/9/2013 12:56:00 PM

I love when a poem paints a picture and sets a mood. Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2013 1:07:00 PM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Patrick. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 12/8/2013 8:58:00 AM

Excellent chain of haiku this is my very dear friend Anne Lise. So love it and enjoyed. thank u so much for the vicarious experience provided by your very beautiful/creative words in this amazing poem of yours. Thank u so much! love and biggest hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 9:05:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/8/2013 6:37:00 AM

Well written Haikus Anne Lise . The first snow is always so beautiful . Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:29:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Anne. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 12/7/2013 9:27:00 PM

The ice crystals seem so fragile and simple at first glance, but closer inspection shows there true beauty and engineering. ~Kilmer

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:28:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2013 8:15:00 PM

my favorite is the first one. PERFECT on a day like today.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2013 8:28:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 12/7/2013 10:02:00 AM

Loved the imagery. Best wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2013 11:41:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/6/2013 8:00:00 PM

wonderful imagery Anne Lise they brought a smile to my face good pen Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2013 6:19:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2013 6:48:00 AM

you take me there with sheer winter glow, anne...am loving this one!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 6:51:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 12/6/2013 4:51:00 AM

So that's it, eh? Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 4:53:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Gerald. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Ravasio

Date: 12/6/2013 4:23:00 AM

warm winter feelings

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 4:25:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/5/2013 10:16:00 PM

Yes I've heard that too, about the yellow ring around the moon mean showers are coming, and in the winter that means more snow! This is a tremendous poem my friend! I loved reading this illustrious piece Anne Lise, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 3:03:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Russell. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/5/2013 8:28:00 PM

You speak of snow,........but you warmed my heart with these beautiful haikus !!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 3:02:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Carrie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/5/2013 6:05:00 PM

Nicely visual loved the lines it is simply put beautiful loved again, read it twice. cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2013 3:02:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/5/2013 10:05:00 AM

A phantasmagoria of images by angels made! Excellent Haiku , dear Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 10:34:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/5/2013 8:55:00 AM

very nicely penned Anne....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 8:57:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 12/5/2013 8:47:00 AM

I don't agree with the comment that your haiku aren't beautiful. They are, and they capture the beauty that winter can be, especially for someone like yourself who has intimate knowledge of the season and it variations. Fine work, Anne-Lise... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 8:56:00 AM

- Thanks for pleasant visit and nice comments Jack . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/5/2013 7:51:00 AM

We are waiting for snow and ice, is coming today, but I don't think it will be anywhere as lovely as this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 8:10:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chidozie Uche O.

Date: 12/5/2013 7:47:00 AM

what a description and unique style of poetry dropped here.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 7:50:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Chidozie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lekau Mamabolo

Date: 12/5/2013 3:33:00 AM

That could be an exciting experience; interesting piece of work.... Lekau

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 3:35:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Lekau. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/4/2013 10:10:00 PM

Anne Lise Your winter pen charms me again. Let it snow!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 2:52:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 12/4/2013 8:15:00 PM

All are beautiful...loved the yellow ring around the moon..:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2013 2:51:00 AM

- Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)