Desire

Sweet sensual lips opening like rose petals with soft moist dewdrop kisses a glimmer of a tear upon her cheek wanting spiritual bonding in mutual loving consent joining in oneness. 24/04/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2016 8:52:00 PM

ohhh, now this is really sweet. I LOVE it.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/5/2016 8:41:00 PM

Lovely. It speaks of the way most women look at the physical side of love. Too bad most men just see the wanton desire and not the spiritual bonding. However, just let her consider another man and he is sure to have the mother of all fits. lol Great job here. Beautifully described and filled with emotion. Another seven. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2016 1:44:00 PM

beautiful sensual write Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx7

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/1/2016 6:54:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Jan. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2016 12:58:00 PM

Good work. Very passionate. I am glad that I chose it to read today. SK

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/1/2016 6:55:00 PM

Thanks Sara nice to see your name here. Hope all is well with you and your family. love phyl