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As Darkness Descends

Blue morphs into a misty gray within twilight's surreal light. And dusk dissolves daylight away, shading silhouettes inked by night. Scarlet rivers flowing blood-red, spill over the horizon's edge. And as a crimson sky is bled, vermilion tints the mountain ledge. Day acquiesces to the night as darkness descends on the earth. And stealthily slips out of sight, preparing for the sun's rebirth. A liquid moon pools high above a fledgling firefly's flashing flight. And beams down on young hearts in love, imbuing passion with its light. (Quatrain) 1/12/2015

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Date: 1/20/2023 11:28:00 PM
Brilliant poem, Emile, congratulations:)
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Date: 1/21/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/24/2019 9:51:00 PM
I was swept up and away in the passionate beauty and color of your atmospheric imagery, Emile. A superb piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/25/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/13/2018 2:29:00 PM
Love these lines "And as a crimson sky is bled vermilion tints the mountain ledge" and the appearance of the firefly. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/13/2015 10:31:00 AM
Your words of imagery is truly wonderful, this is just beautiful my fellow souper marvelious, bravo cheri
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2015 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Cherl, you know how to create a smile, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 8:57:00 PM
wow lovely imagery comes in the fourth stanza.. :) I love how you portrayed how darkness descends so artistic the second is one heavy but the last makes the poem filled with light and love.. :)! the fireflies adds the romantic hue, the line with the scarlet makes it intense... :)! ...olive eloisa :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/12/2015 9:28:00 PM
You are very perceptive and I welcome your thoughts. Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 8:48:00 AM
Poetry at its best! A wonderful expression of love and life! Also a 7.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/12/2015 9:09:00 AM
Jack, your friendly words have warmed my heart, thanks. Emile.
Date: 1/12/2015 8:30:00 AM
I wonderful poem -- music of the night. 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/12/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thanks David, you know how to create a smile, Emile.

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