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Caturday

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Caturday

                                laying down for nap 
                                 stretching out long 
                                 sleepy orange kitty 
                       
                              snow sprinkles down 
                               paw prints all around
                                  kitty runs to hide 

                                 longing to get out
                            watching birds and squirrels 
                                  oh, no,  hot paws 

                            coming thru the trees
                                 lights turn on  
                               cat eyes shinning 

                              look into the sky
                                 wild and free 
                          bobcat on mountain top 

                            moonlight stars twinkle 
                             prowling the night skies                            
                           morning light cat sleeps 

                             morning walking path
                               sun gets in eyes
                             lingering heat cat sighs     



4 / 7 / 2013

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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 4:31:00 PM
    love this fun write

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 9:46:00 AM
    This is cute now I want to take a catnap. Nicely done. love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/10/2013 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you phyl ;}
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:19:00 PM
    Nice work!! :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/27/2013 11:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:20:00 PM
    these are truly wonderful Debbie...

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:28:00 PM
    Cats are som marvelous and mysterious. You capture their essence in this poem. Peace and Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
    Gotta love a set of Haiku about the cat! brilliant and beautiful. I like the cat's eyes shining in the dark. Really cool orange cat you must have. Always, Laura

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/23/2013 9:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 6:27:00 PM
    I've had many cats Debbie and this is awesome...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/21/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Donna ;}
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 9:12:00 PM
    You described most of the cats I have known. Nice work. Thanks for reading and commenting on my stone cycle... Jack

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/21/2013 8:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Jack ;}
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
    This is so SWEET!!! I love your title, and each of your well-metered verses is a delight to read. Well done Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/18/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Keith ;}
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Very clever, indeed. Cat eyes are something special, as is the poet who writes about them. Thank-you for being here and providing all this fun!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/15/2013 1:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Duke
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Every day of the week. :) Enjoyed spending the day with your cat. :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/14/2013 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Hi Debbie" Thanks for your comment on my poem today. I have used the Haiku Syllable Counter down in Resources on the left. It is fun when it calcualates and you have a perfect 5-7-5 score.

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 3:03:00 PM
    Lovely set of cat haikus. The title is a clever play on words. So fun to see their antics come to life through these words.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/13/2013 4:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Suz
  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:51:00 PM
    love these fun haiku : )

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/13/2013 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you jack ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 8:54:00 PM
    Oh Debbie, I'm longing for a cat. he he he.. and here you have one laying on your lap, and the one prancing for a snack or two, by the tree. My favorite haiku IMAGE is the one with the cat prints in the snow.. poor kitty kitty.. and my favorite haiku, is the free ranger called the BOBCAT! they are all puuuurrrrrfect... meow... xox~ LINDA

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:38:00 PM
    as a cat lover, I really enjoyed this set. And how awesome calling it Caturdays. Super clever!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Caturdays are seven days a week of course. I enjoyed your poem Debbie.My cat Tailsman ,Tally as I call him thinks you are a great Writer. I agree with him.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 8:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:02:00 AM
    I find your poem very cute Debbie~*~SKAT

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Those little precious indoor cats and kittens love those birds, squirrels, rats, mice, chipmonks, and they will eat snakes also..Enjoyed your very creative and unique work about the two kinds of cats..The house cat and bobcat which are very much kin...Thanks for stopping by..Those snakes are scary. Some are deadly even though now there is antivenom which can save lives but not every time..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Sara ;}
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:45:00 AM
    yes encapsulates a puddy cat...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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