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Among the Mango Groves

Among the mango groves Rain falls in rallies, waterbeads The gust of wind gather treasure-troves Of passive smell of weeds In the groves,play of waterbeads, breeds The water spirals down the earth A rumpy cudden in trapeze A distant coming nature's re-birth Meandering roots squeeze A trapeze, rebirth ,trees wheeze Rain 's stopping by,a shy goodwill Falling of twigs , nipped buds white sauce oozing Astringent in taste sweet souls on the mill Waters sleep on the bark sousing Sousing in the puddle of rain-a goodwill dousing Manassian Quintain - Poetry Contest Sponsor craig cornish 07 th January,2015

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Date: 2/19/2015 4:52:00 PM
Rajat, this is an amazing resonance of experience of monsoon showers in the mango groves. the showers and the forming of playful water pools reminds one of childhood days. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:35:00 PM
Rajat, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/18/2015 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, for your lovely and very interesting poem, Rajat. Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations Rajat. Wonderful poem. Janet
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/9/2015 5:54:00 AM
Natural phenomena depicted to perfection, dear friend, Rajat! Excellent work. Good luck!
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:27:00 PM
I've never seen this form before - beautifully penned:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:02:00 PM
Yes, that's the way! Well penned.
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:53:00 PM
great job of rhyming the end words, rajat!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:34:00 PM
Mango groves and nature's rebirth. What a fine sensory description this is. Thanks for dropping by. Love, daver
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:40:00 PM
Creative work using some good poetic techniques..Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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