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Photography - Child  Baby Bridge Sun Abstract Girl Summer Dress Cute Little Girl Wallpaper

Small and light A step farther Not afraid Two steps further Lion and tiger Fear not Three step further She goes in search of the world A proud girl Four step further Unlike anyone else Crocodiles, no problem Five step further Halfway to the moon All alone Armed with thorns from a rose Small summer shoes Home to Mom and Dad Six step further Feeling calm harmless of things She is brave The sun dims The evening is approaching A frog croaks Quiet .... quiet as a mouse Fast like the wind she runs across the bridge ..... "Mom I'm home" Oooo (----) )--/ (_/ oooO (---) \--( \_) Oooo (----) )--/ (_/ oooO (---) \--( \_) - 09.06.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Published in the newspaper 15.06.2016

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Date: 8/26/2016 8:03:00 AM
Aww...so sweet...I love the innocence of youth and the 'heart' of home.:-) A charming poem that is a joy to read :-) The 'footsteps' both written and drawn are just genius :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:12:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with you, Lynn :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/18/2016 5:46:00 AM
All the effort of learning to fly, only to, happily, return to the nest....
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Date: 6/18/2016 1:00:00 PM
- Back to safety - Thank you Tom, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 7:40:00 AM
This is such a sweet write. It reminds me of my daughters explorations when they were young, as long as mommy or daddy were nearby.
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:08:00 AM
- Nice memories, James :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/12/2016 6:08:00 AM
Ha Ha :D humorous!
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:41:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 10:32:00 PM
This is so so so delightful, I haven't been around as much, so catching up on some reading, and I needed something refreshing and beautiful to cheer me up, you have done it! thank you!
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Date: 6/12/2016 6:41:00 AM
- Arthur, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 11:08:00 AM
:) A delightful read, Sunshine. I loved it :) The pic is sweet as well. Hugs
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:47:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 9:24:00 AM
Beautiful, just plain beautiful.
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:46:00 AM
- Scott, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/11/2016 7:37:00 AM
Lovely to read about this brave little girl:)
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:45:00 AM
- Thank you Jo, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 11:51:00 PM
There is a magic in how you phrase your words, Anne Lise! Love it :)
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:45:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
What a wonderful write. ...I wish to a have a daughter like this brave girl!!! So beautiful.....
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Date: 6/11/2016 11:44:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Anand :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 9:43:00 AM
Those who are brave bear much better amount of confidence. In perfect confidence pre-designed destination's hidden. If one goes ahead with confidence step by step then destination is got. Lovely poem beautifully crafted. Wonderful message. +7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:13:00 PM
- Gentle as a dove and brave as a lioness, my friend Bl :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/10/2016 6:49:00 AM
I am enchanted by this piece Anne-Lise. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:09:00 PM
- Glad you liked it :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 10:13:00 PM
Delightful Anne-Lise...
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:07:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 6:34:00 PM
Hello! Returning the favor that doesn't seem like much of one, but instead taking the time to read this was all the more reason to say "thanks" for posting it. Such a well written piece of art and the picture to go along side it is scenic and fantastic as well!
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:46:00 AM
- Returning the favor and say thank you for your visit and comments, Jacob - // Sun :)
Date: 6/9/2016 6:15:00 PM
very imaginative poem, seeing the world through this cute little girl's eyes.
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:06:00 PM
- Andrea, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 4:22:00 PM
how uplifting is this wonderful poem... you enlighten me, anne!.. stay brave and huggs!
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 4:13:00 PM
Originality and imagination going hand in hand! Enjoyable dear, Anne-Lise! A fascinating picture!
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
- Demetrios, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 4:04:00 PM
A very , very good write, Anne-Lise. Love the picture and the fascinating true life story of a child. Thank you for reading my "Midst of Calamities". Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/10/2016 12:04:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 3:07:00 PM
A child gaining more and more confidence in the world. My youngest told me last weekend. If my friends at the park you don't have to stay. Yes growing independent.
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:44:00 PM
- Time passes too quickly ... enjoy every day with your daughter, Tim - Thanks for friendly visits and sweet comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 2:36:00 PM
Absolutely charming Anne Lise I could picture the little girl running home saying this - so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 6/9/2016 2:46:00 PM
- A lovely time, a happy childhood - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and sweet comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/9/2016 2:14:00 PM
Too cute. Love the pic. Reminds me of summer days and small children I'd like to be able to bring back. An innocent lovely time. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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Date: 6/9/2016 2:26:00 PM
- Small and happy, without big worries ..... :) - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and sweet comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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