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Sound like shaken steel A powerful beast persecutor All the painful nights Gives bitter taste in the mouth Our step in the shadow sustained Some youthful dreams, drowned Pain and passion go hand in hand The jasmine cries, even in the sun How deep and wide every second means Free ourselves from the painful thoughts 21.09.2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2016 3:51:00 PM

A very powerful write. I love this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2016 1:29:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Armand - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/23/2016 6:00:00 AM

Captivating and powerful emotions dear Anne-Lise! A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2016 6:47:00 AM

- Thank you Demetrios, I very much appreciate your comments and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/22/2016 10:05:00 PM

So beautifully expressed Anne... I loved this..Have a great day ahead....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2016 2:38:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments always nice to see you, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/22/2016 4:47:00 PM

Damnit Anne-Lise, I know I left a comment here yesterday. I don't know what happened to it. I loved your poem because I thought you were writing about ridding ourselves of painful thoughts and how bitter they make us feel.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2016 2:37:00 AM

- Thank you Daniel, I very much appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2016 3:03:00 PM

those last several lines are very powerful. I loved them!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/23/2016 2:36:00 AM

- Thank you, very much appreciate your comments Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2016 11:48:00 AM

Such a dark write Anne lise - think we are both getting ready for Halloween!:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2016 2:24:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments always nice to see you, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2016 9:14:00 AM

you weave a dark, magical spell, dear anne... i like the cringing feel of this one; splendid.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2016 1:27:00 PM

- The darkness can be exciting, if we do not forget where the light is - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments always nice to see you Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Old Man Emu

Date: 9/21/2016 2:43:00 PM

Really like this poem. Great job Regards, Craig

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2016 1:21:00 PM

- Thank you very glad you visit my poem, Craig - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/21/2016 10:41:00 AM

deliver us indeed, to carry painful thoughts like a burden can crush our will to smile my poetic friend...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/22/2016 1:24:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments always nice to see you, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)