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- Teach Me To Understand - Teach Me To Live -

Open the door to your secret kingdom where words have meaning - and hope turns to joy Tears falling on the ground - dries when the sun comes Beautiful snow covered mountains far in the distance A colorful butterfly coming out of its cocoon Finally free to fly - kissing my cheek so weak ... but so strong A half open mussel on the shore ... I glimpsed a gem A rose in my hand ... a leaf are broken ... weeping roses ? A warm gust of wind ... fills me with an indescribable joy Loving truth whispers ... do you understand 12.02.2014 A-L Andresen :) (1st place in the contest)

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Date: 3/15/2014 3:25:00 AM
It strikes a chord in my heart... just as every heart yearns for learning... its like a soothing warm touch on a dark chilly night.. loved it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/15/2014 7:09:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Ritika. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2014 4:37:00 PM
This secret kingdom that you spoke of would be the ideal place to live. I think that it does exist in our hearts, and it is much easier to find than most people realize! This poem is just beautiful, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well! :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 5:00:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments - so kind of you to congratulate, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2014 6:40:00 AM
beautiful Anne Lise . I see why you won with it :) I like the way it flows. oxox
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Date: 3/7/2014 6:45:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/7/2014 1:02:00 AM
Lovely it is, Anne lise, congrats!!
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:34:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Jag ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/6/2014 8:36:00 PM
this is simply beautiful, Anne lise.Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:34:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Andrea ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 3:09:00 PM
Inspired & beautifully executed. // congrats on top placing /x/ Paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 3:30:00 PM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Paul ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 1:11:00 PM
A lovely read! Congrats on the win!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 3:29:00 PM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Abdulhafeez ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Anne!!! .. =) ..^0^
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Date: 3/5/2014 11:02:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, AiyaH ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful dear . I understand your love . Best wishes from India .
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Date: 3/5/2014 11:01:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you,Sandip ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 7:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anne, I loved it......Hugs......Roger
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 8:05:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Roger ... appreciate your visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 7:35:00 AM
Congrats Anne Lise !!! Well said words well understood !! Extremely beautiful !!
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:39:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Dr. Upma... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 3/5/2014 7:00:00 AM
Pure beauty. Congrats on your win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 7:38:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Monterey ... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 3/5/2014 6:29:00 AM
I love your works! Thumbs up for your wonderful piece! :-)
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:39:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Teddy ... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 3/5/2014 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Anne.
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:39:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Kayod5 ... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 3/5/2014 5:28:00 AM
Beautifully written A-L and congratulations on the win :)s & hugs... Verlena
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 6:38:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you, Verlena ... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 3/5/2014 5:16:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, anne
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:38:00 AM
- So kind of you to congratulate, thank you Dr.Ram ... appreciate your visit :)
Date: 2/19/2014 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful words you have penned. love phyl
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Date: 2/19/2014 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/17/2014 2:36:00 PM
Finding beauty in these words and life...love your poem Anne Lise
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Date: 2/17/2014 2:43:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2014 1:10:00 PM
A beautiful poem AnneLise. I think we learn to live one day at a time....Lucilla
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Date: 2/16/2014 1:13:00 PM
- True my friend, Lucilla !!! - Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2014 10:36:00 AM
a rose is given to show respect, not to plead for attention. may your sunday be sweet.. soupie for you, anne.. huggs!
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Date: 2/16/2014 11:02:00 AM
- You make my heart always happy !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2014 9:16:00 AM
A very nice poem Anne, You taught me to understand. I really enjoyed reading this one.....Hugs....Roger
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2014 9:25:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Roger. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/16/2014 4:05:00 AM
with a rose in hand.. happy sunday to you, anne..huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/16/2014 6:58:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2014 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful poem AnneLise. Loved everything about this. Thanks for this beauty.
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Date: 2/16/2014 6:58:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Mustapha. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2014 6:18:00 PM
Simply put my gentle lady BEAUTIFUL. Cheri light and love back at you my friend thanks for the congrads
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Date: 2/16/2014 6:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/15/2014 5:31:00 PM
that;'s a beautiful expressed poem, nice flow, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you,Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/15/2014 5:48:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and a lovely comments from you, Erich. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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