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- Symphony of November -

November the dark month With dewy windows Looking out the window listening after the sound of autumn leaves Autumn's own music Traces of the autumn on the ground The silence of the mountains in the distance With a blue gray glance they send On this day encourages silence but it is irrelevant Dew drops glide silently down like pearls With closed eyes glimpsed the rainbow Naked body lift arms toward the sky Clouds darkens the sky alerts lightning and thunder 04.11.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Wendy Meyer

Date: 11/16/2013 6:32:00 AM

~~ dearest anne, a flash of lightning followed by some distant rumbling of thunder make your poetry perfect to match the silences of autumn leaves and gloom of fallen mountains..such an inspiration your poem! thanks for this one ~~ always, wendy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2013 8:03:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit & comments, Wendy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser

Date: 11/11/2013 11:53:00 AM

Ah, the silence of the mountains in the cold november chill, i can almost feel you descriptiveness. Well done Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2013 11:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and kind comments, Carl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis

Date: 11/9/2013 9:27:00 AM

Anne This is very imaginative and the imagery takes the reader into a world of seasons and changes. Nice job

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2013 9:35:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

Date: 11/8/2013 9:03:00 PM

Anne Lise you amaze me...beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2013 3:03:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/8/2013 4:16:00 PM

Simply beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2013 4:17:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Arthur. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/8/2013 3:45:00 PM

Yes love your description on this poem. Snow is here but melting today. Hope it goes away for another month or two. Talking of rain and that makes icy roads. Hope you have a lovely weekend my friend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2013 4:04:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/8/2013 12:32:00 PM

Enjoyed the imagery... I always miss the sunlight this time of year. Great write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2013 12:33:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Carol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/7/2013 10:15:00 AM

Autumn is truly a symphony, but where would it be without its conductor, summoning the sounds and motioning to emphasize the different performers and their instruments. Take a bow.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2013 11:15:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/6/2013 6:08:00 PM

I love the beauty of autumn and you beautifully captured it in this poem. Very nicely written, Anne Lise, I enjoyed it very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/7/2013 3:18:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry Bolton

Date: 11/6/2013 3:17:00 PM

Fall is my favorite time of the year, Anne I live in a part of America where the temperatures are not a cold as they are in other parts of the country. This is a stunning reflection of the month of November.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 3:20:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, Jerry. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/6/2013 12:05:00 PM

Cloudy, darken sky of Autumn. Some like it. I wish summer was still here! This has to do. Nice write, Anne-Lise. Have an enjoyable Autumn day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 12:09:00 PM

- The winter, frost, wind, snow and cold "eat" up my body .... - Spring and summer is my time :)) - Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Toquyen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 9:58:00 AM

picturesque scenery so vividly expressed, anne... hope autumn is milder this year... grrreat job!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 10:30:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 11/6/2013 9:38:00 AM

You certainly captured a cold autumn, especially the color of it. It's gray here today; I'm feeling it... jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 10:30:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/6/2013 9:21:00 AM

This is so beautiful, full of your lovely sight on with imagery so vivid. I love your last two lines. Oh I love all the lines. This goes into my favorites. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 10:32:00 AM

- Thank you, I am honored Kathryn. - Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/6/2013 9:08:00 AM

A great poem for this month. I loved it. I like the last stanza. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 10:29:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Lucilla. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/6/2013 7:23:00 AM

Ah November great month. Thanks for this lovely poem. Has your husband or daughter posted any poems on the soup lately?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 7:51:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/6/2013 12:55:00 AM

Lovely piece, very creative..thanks for sharing this friend Anne ;) Have a great day always. hugsss ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 2:50:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Maria. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/5/2013 6:33:00 PM

you drew a really beautiful piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 2:49:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/5/2013 4:50:00 PM

Hi Anne, I enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for sharing this write.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2013 2:49:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/5/2013 1:01:00 PM

Your poem in itself is a symphony. It's a beautiful day you have sketched here, Anne-Lise. Enjoyed this one, my friend. Licia :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 1:45:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Licia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 11/5/2013 10:02:00 AM

I can hear and feel the greatness and heartfelt symphony of November through your amazing and very wonderful poem my dearest friend Anne Lise. So love it and enjoyed. Hugging this excellent poem and u! Thank you so much for sharing! More blessing to u! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 11:38:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 11/5/2013 9:52:00 AM

A very descriptive write. This easily places vivid images into anyone's mind.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 11:37:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/5/2013 9:34:00 AM

Excellent music of November's natural environment adorned with very nice imagination. Its a caught beauty, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 11:37:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 9:23:00 AM

wow you had some awesome lines in this November poem. Capturing its essence!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 9:32:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/5/2013 8:19:00 AM

Anne Lise a new form to me. I like it your write is exquisite Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2013 8:25:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments, always enjoyable Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)