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- Sparkling Blossoms In One Star -

My dearest orchid Eastern flower of divine beauty You whisper my name raising the spirit high Jasmine sweetly kissing air In one breath of your aroma Drifting thoughts sail over the moon Wrapped in your passion calling me yours No matter what may come our way You own this heart skipping beat Dreaming in your starlight Touched by the dew teardrops of night Destiny leaves footprints Purity of truths heart Sweet miracle of love I know there is an angel watching over us Daydreams walking into the clouds Hold eve to the late kiss This soulful sanctuary sings enchanting heartbeats Embracing this Heavenly dream Discovering a newborn Kingdom Always drying your tears reborn beautiful beams (unrhymed tercets) A Collaborated write by Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 12:11:00 PM

This is amazing and lovely. Thank you for the incredible share.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/25/2016 12:16:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Funom :) - A pleasure to share with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/19/2015 7:04:00 AM

Neat how the perspective here ranges from close to far away. It's like flying!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2015 7:12:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/18/2015 1:06:00 PM

A truly magnificent co-write here Anne-Lise and Liam!! The soulfulness and passion of this Tercet write are matched only by the word picture created from this write and its most wonderful and descriptiive imagery. "TR"/"FAV" Cheers and Best . . . Merry Christmas!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2015 6:55:00 AM

- Dear friend Gary, many thanks for visiting "TR"/"FAV" and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake

Date: 12/16/2015 3:56:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Anne and Liam, A great collab Anne, enjoyed this wonderful piece!! Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2015 5:52:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2015 1:07:00 PM

Enjoyed the sweet aroma of this one..Thanks for dropping by..We usually go see what the grand children got for Christmas but it is kind of different now without all the noise and activity..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2015 5:52:00 AM

- Sara, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/16/2015 12:17:00 PM

Excellent beauty adorned with beautiful words my lovely friend. 7 i feel.Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2015 5:51:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/16/2015 9:12:00 AM

a gem of a piece for you and liam, anne...i feel the wonder of this one.. happy near friday and huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2015 5:51:00 AM

- Nette, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/16/2015 6:31:00 AM

Very beautiful, smart ,sweet , elegant poem I'm so glad I've stopped by to read it...hugs/dalia

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 7:40:00 AM

- Glad you stopped by, Dalia :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/16/2015 5:52:00 AM

From now on whenever take care of my flowers on my roof garden your exquisite verses will come to mind! Another marvel of a poem, child of your collaboration with Liam, dear Anne-Lise! A seven to each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 7:41:00 AM

- Nice :) - Dear Demetrios, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/16/2015 12:41:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful verses and flowing. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:33:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/15/2015 7:28:00 PM

Lovely collaberation, Merry Christmas Anne Lise. Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:32:00 AM

- Merry Christmas, Debbie :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/15/2015 5:58:00 PM

anne, you always do so well....then liam's help always makes that easier to tell....the chemistry you share is like a strand of dna....inseparable and undeniable perfection, that's all I will say....awesome job you two....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:31:00 AM

- Eric, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/15/2015 4:01:00 PM

How lovely this is...your writing compliments each others so beautifully!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:29:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/15/2015 1:45:00 PM

thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a wonderful weekend

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/15/2015 1:41:00 PM

truly a delight reading this again anne lise your words always sing a beautiful tune wishing you dear friend a blessed beautiful weekend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:29:00 AM

- Always a pleasure, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/15/2015 1:07:00 PM

Well done Anne.. Kindest regards!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2015 4:27:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Ken :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/15/2015 7:01:00 AM

Anne Lise, beautiful lovely lines weave magically with Liam... kudos to both of you!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 8:19:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, dear Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 12/15/2015 12:55:00 AM

"Jasmine sweetly kissing air In one breath of your aroma Drifting thoughts sail over the moon" There is overflowing love and passion. A sweet love poem... (as expected from such a collaboration) ..7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 3:41:00 AM

- Nadiya, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/14/2015 5:33:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Just wonderful!Very enchanting!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 3:38:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2015 4:57:00 PM

absolutely delightful Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2015 3:37:00 AM

- Jan, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)