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I wish I could buy me a spaceship Take a trip through time and fly past the stars, the moon and the sky My spaceship should be bright - crystal design Fly silently through endless space - around all the known planets A giant spaceship floating in an infinite darkness A vessel running on principles that we do not even understand I know ... it's my dream and fantasy But I love this idea of living in my own spaceship But despite my dream ... I fear alien unearthly Aliens Never leaves my spaceship without my Stun gun - a self defense weapon Millions of lights are lit in the skies .... from a single source ... the sun I can not change the direction of my spaceship But I can always reach my destination - not limit myself Space is an inspiring concept to play with in my dreams 23.03.2014 A-L Andresen :) Contest Name: Spaceship Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Deadline 3/27/2014 (8th in the contest)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:19:00 PM

7 rate for the unique weaving of words and pure style vs imagery! another favorite! WOW!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 6:37:00 AM

- WooooW ..... HUGE HONOR !!! - Thank you, JSL !!!!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thank you for buying me this Spaceship today! Funny thing is, We cans haves us them spaceships any time we Dream and DREAM BIG. THIS IS FAN FREAKING TASTICO!~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 6:35:00 AM

- Sometime in the future ..... I come in a spaceship.. to visit you :)- We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining JSL !! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

Date: 5/23/2014 3:27:00 PM

beautiful poem, id love a space ship like dr who tardis, to travel back or forth in time, change a few things along the way make different choices. hahah dont work that way though, but one can dream thanks for all your kind comments

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/24/2014 1:35:00 PM

- In dreams, anything can happen :))) - Thank you for a nice ride along in my fantasy spaceship Diane. - enjoyable that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2014 1:13:00 PM

Inspiring piece - stirs feelings to be able to move through time and space, beyond earthly limitations. Thank you for the inspiration!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 1:20:00 PM

- Happy that you liked this poem, Pandita :)) - - Thanks for the nice visit :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tyler Garlick

Date: 4/5/2014 1:05:00 PM

Wow, this work leaves me wondering so many beautiful things. I loved it. I'd love to know the personal motivation behind it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/5/2014 1:13:00 PM

- Two boys who I know, are very concerned about spaceship :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Tyler ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:15:00 PM

ANNE, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/1/2014 3:16:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings, Linda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/28/2014 5:37:00 PM

Up beyond the clouds, our minds are free. Great stuff.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/29/2014 9:23:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, Scott ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/27/2014 8:51:00 PM

We are all riding in our own spaceship's. Your's sounds lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 2:37:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, Robert ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/27/2014 8:21:00 AM

Such a wonderfully written poem Anne, Congrats on your win.....Hugs.....Roger

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/28/2014 2:36:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Roger :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/26/2014 12:55:00 PM

wolaaah!!! ...i told you ..this is a winner piece ever! .. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 1:08:00 PM

- It was because - : your best wishes in advance AiyaH !!! - Thanks for the lovely visit and greetings my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 3/26/2014 12:20:00 PM

A lovely cosmic write Anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 12:26:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit, Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2014 5:15:00 AM

what a grreat win, dear anne.. sweet cheers to you and huggs!..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 9:28:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

V P Mahur

Date: 3/26/2014 3:44:00 AM

Dear Anne, Nice this one. It is my dream too. I really felt floating in the space.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 4:06:00 AM

- We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining - Hope you really enjoyed it, V P :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/25/2014 10:26:00 PM

Enjoyed your creative write on spaceship and congrats on the fine win, anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 3:16:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and greetings Dr. Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 3/25/2014 4:09:00 PM

This is lovely. I hope you win it

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 3:15:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit, Funom ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/25/2014 3:21:00 PM

congrats on placing Anne Lise most enjoyable poem hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/26/2014 3:14:00 AM

- Thanks for my poem was chosen, Shadow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/25/2014 12:39:00 PM

Oh! what a beautiful line of inner spirit's conception...... "Space is an inspiring concept to play with in my dreams". You are genius in deep thought. Metaphysical philosophy, I feel here. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2014 12:50:00 PM

- Thank you for a nice ride along in my fantasy spaceship bl. - enjoyable that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/25/2014 8:52:00 AM

Wild imagination rules..Reads like a winner in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2014 11:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the lovely wishes - nice with your visit Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/25/2014 4:14:00 AM

Super imagination dear...Yes, You can always reach your destination...All is well...Best wishes from my heart...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2014 4:31:00 AM

- Thanks for the lovely wishes - nice with your visit Sandip ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/24/2014 3:40:00 PM

Intergalactic flight through space and time captivates the imagination and excites the mind BUT if you leave my dear you will sadden your friends therefore I wish you good luck with the contest with this impressive spaceship of your poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 4:48:00 PM

- I will take all my friends with me into space :) - Thanks for the nice visit, Demetrios! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2014 2:57:00 PM

enjoy the trip out of this world anne.. monday ends with huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 2:59:00 PM

- Tuesday begins with a smile :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/24/2014 2:23:00 PM

Excellent, Anne-Lise! I didn't know you were an explorer! Beyond the galaxies! My best, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 2:44:00 PM

- One can never know .......... many surprises in life :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Chuck ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 3/24/2014 10:37:00 AM

I loved your poem and what a lovely dream. Isn't it fun to put dreams into writing. Truly 'the sky is the limit' when it comes to dreaming. Poetry is a wonderful way to condense one's thoughts and they beome.more poignant. So glad to meet you and looking forward to reading more of your poems. So glad too that you introduced yourself to me. Charlene

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 12:15:00 PM

- Thanks for your kind visit, nice to meet you Charlene - Always enjoyable with new "poet friends" - more friends together .... even more enjoy :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/24/2014 8:47:00 AM

nice trip, Anne Lise... !!! this is a beautiful way to express our dreams.... and you're true.. it's not limited!!! ...I hope i'll take a ride with you one time... but I have a trip now going to universe.. lol... using my endless imagination spaceyard..lol..Have a nice day my dearest friend.. :o))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 9:01:00 AM

- We take a trip together when the moon and stars shining - Hope you really enjoyed it, AiyaH :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/24/2014 8:49:00 AM

Oopps! I forgot.. good luck in the contest.. ^__^ ...and advance.. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ^__^

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2014 12:30:00 AM

A brilliant write that inspires my dear friend Anne Lise. So love this gem of yours and enjoyed. Thank u so much again for sharing! Big hugs! May i also have this chance to thank u for the nice comments again on my poem. More blessings to u and have a nice day! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2014 4:27:00 AM

- Thank you for a nice ride along in my spaceship Leonora - nice that you wanted to join me :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)