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- Longing and Tears -

A golden key in my hand Perhaps it opens the door to a secret room Pandora's box - seeking total freedom through love Will the future be controlled by the past Sentimental thoughts - heart grabs the soul A dew drop is laying like jelly and shaking It seemed almost impossible Your words lift me up I can climb the highest mountain Living present in hope and love The silence sinks in ... tears born of flames Empty thoughts sets no trace 10.05.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/12/2015 10:26:00 AM

outstanding beautiful pen anne lise deep golden piece bless you pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2015 12:01:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, my friend Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/22/2014 11:09:00 AM

Coming in deep from the heart and soul Anne Lise. The future can be controlled by the past if we allow it too. But on the other hand it is from the past that we learn. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/22/2014 11:17:00 AM

- Yes, you're absolutely right dear Phyllis !! Thanks for the nice visit and comments,my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser

Date: 5/21/2014 12:33:00 PM

Just beautiful Anne, captivating and serene, blessings Carl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/21/2014 12:39:00 PM

- Carl, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jt Nyx

Date: 5/21/2014 12:22:00 PM

You have such a gentle spirit, and it shows through your writing. I very much enjoyed your poem. Have wonderful day Anne-Lise Your Friend Jess :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/21/2014 12:37:00 PM

- Jess, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/21/2014 1:04:00 AM

Spiritual write. Done it well. Enjoyed. Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/21/2014 3:48:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit - and lovely comments,my dear friend Ravi :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hitesh Panchal

Date: 5/20/2014 1:39:00 AM

wonderful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/20/2014 2:28:00 AM

- Hitesh, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/17/2014 12:26:00 PM

A truly powerful and image evoking presentation.. Deep must be the power of your heart and soul.. Bravo my friend, a huge bravo!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2014 12:29:00 PM

- Robert, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone like my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 5/17/2014 8:45:00 AM

Powerful piece Anne, vivid universal emotions through your eyes, excellent write honey! :-) Love always, Keith

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/17/2014 8:48:00 AM

- Keith, thanks for the kind words from you - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/14/2014 4:56:00 AM

As usual, your words are amazing. Just the image of holding a key and being unsure what to do with it shows great longing.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 7:09:00 AM

- Thanks for the kind words from you, Monterey - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 5/14/2014 3:39:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful heartfelt poem of yours this afternoon my dearest friend Anne Lise. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 3:46:00 AM

- Glad you liked my poem :)) - Thanks for visiting and your commets, dear friend Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mel Merrill

Date: 5/14/2014 1:29:00 AM

A wonderfully sad and real bit of art. How well you control the emotion, but there's definitely a passion burning, and it's great to see. I'm glad I stopped by. Until you have more comments, you can count on me lol Love and hugs, my sweet...xoxo...mel

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 2:48:00 AM

- Glad that you like my poem, Mel :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/13/2014 8:52:00 PM

ANNE LISA, I WROTE WIND MILLS FOR YOU DEAREST LADY, TAKE CARE AND GOODNIGHT, SORRY NOT FEELING WELL TONIGHT, CHERI

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 2:49:00 AM

- Hope you are better today, Cherl ! - good thoughts transmitted to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/13/2014 7:01:00 PM

a pen of love Anne Lise with tinges of sadness ty or visiting my page hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 2:53:00 AM

- Hi Shadow, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone read my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/13/2014 4:30:00 PM

This is my favorite poem from you to date Anne! You give such beautiful form to the extremes of feelings and dreams. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 2:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the kind words from you, Justin - glad you would read and comments my write. - Always nice to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason

Date: 5/13/2014 3:46:00 PM

very spiritual! not easy to put into words but you did it :) Warm thoughts, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2014 2:59:00 AM

- Sometimes words come by themselves ...... - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ralph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/13/2014 11:43:00 AM

i wish you miles of smiles. dear anne.. have a fine day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2014 12:07:00 PM

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) // huggs !!

Sam Raj

Date: 5/13/2014 10:11:00 AM

Pretty inspiring and emotional. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2014 12:06:00 PM

- Glad that you like my poem, Sam :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/12/2014 3:25:00 PM

Anne Lise, I've written something just for you today, I hope you enjoy it, It's a thank you for all the beautiful visions you've written for me and others, your soft form of poetry is truly inspirational, I hope this tribute will do your work justice. cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2014 1:33:00 AM

- I'm not sure which poem you wanted me to read "just for you" :) - Thanks for visiting and your commets Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/12/2014 3:04:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, This is a very discriptive write, the words expressed here are elegant and honest. Loved it:-) Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2014 1:37:00 AM

- Nice that you like my poem - Your visits and comments make me happy - thank you, Deborah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2014 1:07:00 PM

I love this poem as it is introspective - questioning and searching for answers while hoping! Well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 1:10:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and your commets Pandita. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/12/2014 11:09:00 AM

hope this is not your mood, nonetheless , a splendid write.. dropping by to send my hello, anne.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 11:32:00 AM

- it is not my mood, dear Nette :))) - huggs ;)

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/12/2014 4:10:00 AM

Hello, Anne-Lise. I felt uneasy and had a sense of longing after I read this kind of sad yet beutifully written poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 6:00:00 AM

- Jake, thanks for taking your time to read and comments my poem : - Longing And Tears - Always nice that someone read my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2014 12:09:00 AM

a sad one, Anne. Nice poem and I hope you had a marvelous mother's day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 2:15:00 AM

- No Mother's Day - it's in February in Norway, Andrea :) - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/11/2014 7:34:00 PM

Lovely work and very interesting, well written and it leaves one with alot to think about, thanks for sharing it with me tonight, happy mother's day glad you enjoyed my always a princess write. cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2014 2:17:00 AM

- No Mother's Day - it's in February in Norway, Cherl :) - Glad you liked my poem. - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2014 3:48:00 PM

Interesting work that you have penned in this work..Many walk around with the past strapped to their backs inhibiting them from living in the present..Enjoyed reading.. Thanks for the visit to my page..And thanks for the Mother's Day greeting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2014 3:54:00 PM

- Yes, it's really true Sara. - Thanks for visiting and your commets. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)