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You filled my soul with sweet My heart sings so loudly ~ like dancing feet Butterflies,laughter and happy thoughts like bells A brilliant rainbow arched across ~ colorful shells A beautiful cobweb with drops full of dew The gray sky turned to blue ~ reflected in my shoe There’s no need to leave my dream land I can feel your heartbeat ~ forever hold my hand As heavens gift to me you bring Together in love ~ hear the angels sing Deep ~ devotion And True ~ emotion - 07.06.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/21/2016 11:27:00 PM

I like your dream land. Take me with you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/22/2016 7:23:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Messoh Vincent

Date: 6/12/2016 11:58:00 AM

May you kindly allow me to follow your poetry please... it's just so lovely reading from you my dear.....hugs//

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2016 1:12:00 PM

- With pleasure, Messoh :)

Messoh Vincent

Date: 6/12/2016 11:53:00 AM

Surely my dearest Sun, this is just so special and superb... I have to admit that you have a very touchy and unique way of painting love. I greatly admire this my dear :) Hugs...hugs...and more warm hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2016 1:11:00 PM

- Messoh, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2016 6:07:00 AM

I love the sound of your heartbeat, Anne Lise!! Lovely and romantic lines....great picture, too! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:43:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2016 5:26:00 AM

Beautiful write Sunshine...Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 6/10/2016 10:15:00 PM

Lovely, lovely poem Anne-Lise. Congratulations. ...Fran

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Francis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/10/2016 8:25:00 PM

A lovely poem, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your HM win in 'the colors of love' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:41:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 6/10/2016 6:37:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, I thought you did a wonderful job here. It was very inspiring and heart felt. Great job. Keep up the good work. It is so nice to hear from you again. Thank you so much for commenting on my entry. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:43:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Earl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/10/2016 4:56:00 PM

Congrats on being HM my lovely lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/11/2016 11:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and congrats, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/9/2016 6:12:00 PM

SUPERB BEAT, GREAT RHYME AND ROMANCE SPUN ACROSS THE PAGE... The wonderful ending matches the entire piece perfectly.A7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/10/2016 4:43:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/9/2016 1:05:00 PM

This was beautiful and love the way you rhyme. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 2:05:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/9/2016 12:37:00 PM

Love and heartbeats...always pleasant to read something new about them. keep it up!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 2:04:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sunita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/9/2016 8:33:00 AM

Written with grace and beauty...very "smuk" lol...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 8:34:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 8:34:00 AM

"SMUK" I think it's a Swedish word :)

Judy Ball

Date: 6/9/2016 8:18:00 AM

Beautifully worded. It has a soft and sweet feel to it. Well done my friend. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 8:32:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unknown Person

Date: 6/9/2016 5:40:00 AM

THIS IS....claps..~BLESSED~..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 6:49:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Lekhika :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 6/8/2016 7:11:00 PM

Pretty poem, Anne-Lise. especially love the last few lines. ...Fran

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:09:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Francis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/8/2016 4:26:00 PM

excellent poetry, Anne Lisa...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:09:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2016 4:17:00 PM

Great pic!! I have taken pictures of raindrops on spider webs before..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:08:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/8/2016 3:34:00 PM

Beautiful poem, great flow, very romantic, Anne - Lise. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 5:08:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/8/2016 1:52:00 PM

Loved much the deep devotion and true emotion. Excellently done my lovely lovely friend. A beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 2:29:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vincent Flannery

Date: 6/8/2016 1:33:00 PM

Very nicely written Anne Lise. Love is a Many-Splendored Thing, and it should never get old. This is a good reminder for so many who forget what they have. Take care and God Bless..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 2:28:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Vincent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/8/2016 1:05:00 AM

I love this sweet write, Anne-Lise:) Thought provoking lovely rhymes:) All the best for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 11:22:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/8/2016 12:24:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful write. Lovely couplets. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 11:22:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 6/7/2016 9:06:00 PM

You write it as you see it! I read it as you've written it and see it! Beautiful Anne-Lise! ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 11:21:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/7/2016 6:32:00 PM

your love is a large frame containg all colors, anne... beautiful!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/8/2016 11:21:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)