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Passed the old church at midnight Night time dark, damp and windy Thoughts about coming home to a warm bed Hear sounds from the bushes and trees Glimpsing human shadows They move slowly and very quiet The wind comes against me with a rotten smell The smell is indescribable nauseating The lights of a car further down the street gives me a cruel picture Three human figures indented and rotting faces Apathetic and dull but driven by the will to kill The car is advancing by my side, the driver he knows he's seen it before Zombies love this place at midnight Never go here alone on the night of Halloween < Stories of Zombies originated in the Afro Caribbean spiritual belief system of Vodoo, wooden publican of the people being controlled as laborers by a powerful wizard.> Who has not heard of it .... I can still smell the rotten smell Sponsor Leonora Galinta Contest Name Halloween Poem Contest with Only 1 theme. 15.10.2013 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved (2nd place in the contest)

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Date: 11/23/2013 5:00:00 AM
so scary Anne Lise congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/23/2013 6:36:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Shadow !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2013 3:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win Anna Lise, This poem was put together well. I just loved it....Roger
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Date: 11/22/2013 3:18:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Roger !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2013 4:51:00 AM
congratulations on your win Anna Lise, spooky xx
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Date: 11/21/2013 4:52:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Mandy !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/20/2013 7:03:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Joyce !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 5:44:00 PM
sounds almost real like you were there! congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:20:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Andrea !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 4:54:00 PM
Anne, . Congratulations with your awesome Zombie win. Stay Alive LOL....... SKAT ~Love
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:19:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Skat !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 4:26:00 PM
Very creepy! I like it! Great work, Anne Lise! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:19:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Kelly !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Anne
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Dr. Ram !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. bl !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 9:07:00 AM
Well done Anne Lise, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/20/2013 10:41:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice congratulation. Richard !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2013 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations my dearest friend Anne Lise on your super win in my contest with only one theme, “Zombie”! I extremely love and thoroughly enjoyed your very entertaining and outstanding spooky poem. Thank you so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice wins, Leonora !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :))))
Date: 10/31/2013 4:06:00 PM
Perfectly...creepy!
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Date: 10/31/2013 4:34:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Cherie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2013 12:47:00 PM
Great poem! Happy Halloween!
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:48:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Zach. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2013 2:46:00 PM
cool imagery reading it at the perfect time
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Date: 10/21/2013 3:54:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Anne. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2013 6:19:00 PM
Creepy zombies roaming the night. Guess that is why i do not watch horror movies. LOL Nicely penned Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:53:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2013 9:26:00 PM
Very creative and creepy Halloween Zombies. Good luck in the contest friend Anne :) :) Have a blessed weekend to you and to your family. Hugs ;)
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:38:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Maria ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2013 6:13:00 PM
I really enjoyed this creepy zombie poem! This would be great to read on a dark and stormy Halloween night! Really good work, Anne-Lise. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the great comments!
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:38:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Kelly! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:51:00 PM
A great Halloween poem!
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Date: 10/18/2013 3:12:00 PM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Carol ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/18/2013 2:24:00 AM
I know from the first look of the title that this is for me my very dear friend Anne Lise. So, can't help myself not to peek;))) Thnx a lot in advance! Have a great day! Thank you for your precious time passing by & your wonderful comments. Sorry, just have little time @ soup these days 'cuz of joining seminars & spate of work. But I do my best to visit & leave/post some simple poems esp. before goin for a long trip & be back @ soup perhaps by 1st wk of Nov. Thank u s m! love & big hugsLeonora
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:27:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Leonora ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2013 10:49:00 AM
Love your realistic creative twist. Captivating imagery :)
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:57:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Karen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2013 10:43:00 AM
enjoying this again on a rainy day with green tea on the side... almost friday, anne...almost halloween too..:) huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2013 10:56:00 AM
- Black coffee here! :)))
Date: 10/17/2013 9:18:00 AM
Super intense!!! Damn fine job!
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:23:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem,Drake ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2013 5:54:00 AM
Hi Anne, A very special write fit for Halloween! Ken
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:09:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem,Ken ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/17/2013 4:17:00 AM
Gotteh love them zombies! Well written and creative! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:20:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Laura ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/16/2013 4:51:00 PM
really enjoyed beautiful piece
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2013 3:28:00 AM
- Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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