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James Fraser

Date: 8/21/2014 4:29:00 PM

For so few words, it tells a story of many. Love this one Anne Lise. It will forever leave the reader wondering what happened - James...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/22/2014 2:45:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, James !!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 6:08:00 PM

WoW! This Haiku is really sad to me, I enjoy the honesty. RAW

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 5:39:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, JSL !!! - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saba Khan

Date: 7/22/2014 7:10:00 AM

that's sad :( I wish you get your wish fulfiled A-L Andresen.. Have a good day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2014 10:07:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Saba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/19/2014 4:08:00 PM

Lovely but so sad about your dream lover. Sorry have been away for a few weeks to British Columbia and then off to Banff but now am back home. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/20/2014 12:44:00 PM

- Phyllis, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

L. M. K.

Date: 7/13/2014 7:28:00 AM

Sad and beautiful haiku, thank you for sharing!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2014 7:30:00 AM

- Thanks for reading my Haiku, L.M.K. - // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/12/2014 8:46:00 AM

Enjoyed this one. Happy writing and God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2014 9:09:00 AM

- Regina my new friend, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Danai Daisy

Date: 7/6/2014 12:57:00 PM

I felt the emotion in those few lines.. x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2014 2:03:00 PM

- Happy for you liked my Haiku, Danai :) - Thanks for your visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/5/2014 10:08:00 PM

Anne, liked your Haiku. Thanks for visit to my page. Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/6/2014 3:33:00 AM

- Mohan, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/5/2014 6:19:00 AM

Oh, so sad to not even have what you desire in dreams.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2014 6:31:00 AM

- Monterey, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/5/2014 12:50:00 AM

Even though this type of poem is not my favorite, I feel the saddness in your words within your write. It's sad my friend, I hope this special someone comes back someday for you and I can read than a happier ending for you. Take care gentle soul cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/5/2014 5:38:00 AM

- I'm not sad ...... just my haiku :) - Cherl, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 7/4/2014 2:51:00 PM

Such a sad little Haiku, written straight from the heart. Thanks for stopping by my poems.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2014 2:55:00 PM

- John, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2014 2:24:00 PM

Oh, this is so heartfelt, so sweet, and lovely write my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm always missing everyone too esp. those who're so dear in my heart. You're one of them. Wishing you a great weekend my dear friend. Hope you're always fine. Many hugs, Love you much, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2014 2:45:00 PM

- My dear friend Leonora, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2014 4:46:00 AM

I love sweet and sour...but not at the cost of seeing you sad! Lovely haiku! /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/4/2014 8:29:00 AM

- I'm not sad ...... just my haiku :) - Paul, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 7/2/2014 9:30:00 AM

Good morning Anne Lise, Very sweet, thought provoking poem. Nice job. Keep up the great work. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 10:28:00 AM

- Earl, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2014 9:07:00 AM

It's sad, not even yours in the dream. Nicely done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 10:28:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/2/2014 8:45:00 AM

How unfortunate, the pain of unrequited love, but so well penned.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 8:51:00 AM

- Scott, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Mohn

Date: 7/2/2014 7:55:00 AM

Lovely and poignant Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 8:06:00 AM

- David, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Leon Enriquez

Date: 7/2/2014 7:44:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise: So sad but true. Lovely write. Leon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 8:06:00 AM

- Leon, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 7/2/2014 5:35:00 AM

Wow! I am not very good at writing Haiku's, but you sure are. This is a gem, Anne Lise. bfn Elaine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 6:08:00 AM

- Fun to try - Elaine, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/1/2014 6:09:00 PM

An awesome haiku Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 4:01:00 AM

- Joseph, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/1/2014 5:45:00 PM

Wow, " even in my dreams you were never even mine"...great two lines

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 4:01:00 AM

- Frederic, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2014 4:12:00 PM

nice one, anne lise! haven't seen you in a while so it's good to see a poem of yours...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 4:00:00 AM

-Ilene, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2014 3:38:00 PM

oh i wish dreams did come true Anne lise - this is truly beautiful but sad! hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2014 3:59:00 AM

- Jan, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/1/2014 1:59:00 PM

An image in own mirror. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2014 2:12:00 PM

-Bl, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/1/2014 12:53:00 PM

OH....That is so sweet. What fool wouldn't be yours? Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2014 1:34:00 PM

-Eileen, thanks for your visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 26 - I Wish - oxox // Anne-Lise :)