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- Haiku X 19 - Ice King -

The arctic steel blue Frost smoke rising from the sea Wintertime.... Ice King rules - I hold many ice cubes in my hand, they melt slowly ..... my hands is numb, wet and cold. - There was a lot of mess ..... water everywhere .. - (All this just for you .....) - Picture reminds me that I need to enjoy every day of summer and autumn - - winter is blue, cold, icy, wet and looong. 22.07.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/27/2013 3:46:00 PM

Well written once again Anne! Always. Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2013 3:49:00 PM

- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Laura. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cogan

Date: 8/25/2013 3:54:00 PM

Great Haiku, Anne Lise. I can feel the Nordic winter. I like this one. Well done! Shane

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2013 3:21:00 AM

- Shane, thank you for nice visit, always pleasant with feed-back on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2013 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/22/2013 1:05:00 PM

- Thank you for congratulation, Sara! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/20/2013 2:04:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your well deserved win in Skat's contest. Bravo! Thanks for your appreciationof my poem The Perished Might, Anne. It wrenches my heart when I see tyranny unleashed on the people in the world of today. My message to the tyrants is, take lesson from history and mend your ways. Regards -Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/20/2013 2:06:00 PM

- Thank you for congratulation, Mohammad! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/19/2013 8:35:00 PM

very nice..I enjoyed your winning piece. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/20/2013 2:24:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Barbara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2013 3:42:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 3:50:00 PM

- Thank you for congratulation, Joseph ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 PM

HELLO ANNE, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 2:34:00 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest! - Thank you Skate - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 2:31:00 PM

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/3/2013 7:54:00 AM

Nice haiku, excellent word choice, very well written good luck in the contest, blessings sueellen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2013 12:12:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sue-Ellen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/2/2013 4:39:00 PM

love it ;} xo's to you ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2013 3:16:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/2/2013 10:45:00 AM

Anne wonderful done if this is for the contest best wishes I think you'll done well! Thank you also for your support! Laura :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2013 10:51:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/31/2013 11:51:00 AM

Brilliant words and descriptions created a spectacular image of an Ice King Well done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2013 3:49:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Karen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2013 7:12:00 AM

Just saw Leonora's birthday poem for you and your message below here that you returned on my comment. Happy Belated birthday. Joe and I are born same year but different months!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/30/2013 9:06:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit , Andrea.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2013 12:07:00 PM

this still blows me away, anne.. have a fine day!..:) huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 12:16:00 PM

... do not blow far away...........:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/25/2013 8:12:00 AM

Awesome Anne, really enjoyed this piece :) Happy Belated Birthday to you too! hope your day was a blessed one xhugsxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 8:19:00 AM

- Thanks for the congratulations, Wilma ! - Thanks for your visit and comment , much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/25/2013 6:25:00 AM

You are a great poet,,, I see it was your birthday. I hope you had a fabulous one my sweet friend ;},,, love hugs and blessings for the new year ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 6:27:00 AM

- Thanks for the congratulations,Debbie ! - Thanks for your visit and comment , much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/25/2013 3:51:00 AM

Nicely done poet, there are a few talented poets on this site and you are one of them. I love this poem poet. Happy Belated Birthday I hope it was a good one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 3:55:00 AM

- Thanks for all the beautiful Words Sean !!!! .... I blush ... :) - Nice of your visit, thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/24/2013 8:38:00 PM

I see it was your birthday yesterday. So a belated Happy BIRTHDAY Anne-Lise may you have a wonderful year. You both can celebrate together as you are in the same month. Yes, ice cubes remind me of winter and that will be here soon enough. I was just thinking we are half way thru the season already and I want more summer. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 2:15:00 AM

- Thanks for the congratulations, Phyllis! - Agree with you: let summer be looooong!! - Thanks for your visit and comment , much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 2:43:00 PM

btw, was it your birthday recently. I know it was your hubbie's but the note from Nette makes it look like it was yours too?

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 2:49:00 PM

Arild: 17.07 and I: 23.07 - but we are not born the same year. (no greeting ...... (?) ....)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 2:42:00 PM

I don't know who is more foolish, you for doing many ice cubes at once in five min. or me for holding only one but for a longer time. Anyway, how cool that you were inspired to do an Ice king haiku from it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 2:56:00 PM

- Who said anything about 5 minutes ... - "Hold an ice cold ice cube until it melts. then write what you feel after viewing the photos. " - Thanks for your visit, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/24/2013 12:34:00 PM

here's to an afterglow from you sweet birthdate, anne.... shine on and huggs!.. good to kow you enjoyed the blog!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 12:43:00 PM

<3 U !!! :))))

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/24/2013 11:26:00 AM

Excellent picture you have drawn with a haiku. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 11:30:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment bl, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 7/24/2013 10:14:00 AM

great one Anne lisa (:c Jenish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 11:10:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Jenish, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Royal Ninja

Date: 7/24/2013 9:23:00 AM

thank you for your support, I really enjoyed this one of holding the ice, shivers it sends to me and that numb feeling don't know if it hurts or just can't feel it, much love, Royal Trevino

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 11:10:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Royal, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/24/2013 12:23:00 AM

I'm not ready to think of winter time yet! But the poem was enjoyable... :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 2:48:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Dan, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/23/2013 7:41:00 PM

Excellent ! Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 2:47:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Laura, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)