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- Grey Shadows Never Dies -

The black side of a life betrayal and choked dreams Cries of pain that are locked into their souls Evil twistfate deals aches and screams Inside darkened dungeons filled with peril and woe In the trap, feels like stuck in of eternity madness Hands are not chained but mind is unclear Hidden away from the world today within darkness crying Nightmares of life's perils strike deep irons hotly burns Blowing with the wind, flying a hurricane Shamelessly all trying to live from day to day Frozen ice frosting bites cold deeds creeps inside scars Slowly from the scrapyard of life's twisted metal crushed They cried many tear, tears of hope - wanted life to last But life was not fair enough as the remains lay deeply covered Unraveling out savagery of an animal cold cutting steel beast cursed Piercing howls forgiving the past in order to be redeemed blessed A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 20.01.2015 - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/23/2015 11:22:00 AM

What a contrast to what I have read from you in the past my friend, but I enjoyed it alot, it's a haunting poem of an errie flavoring of spooky intensions it gave me cold chills very cool by the way. I think us as human beings like the rush of being scared sometimes, and this did it for me, cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2015 11:52:00 AM

- Life goes up .... and down .... - Cherl, thank you for visiting and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/23/2015 9:17:00 AM

wow powerful deep and dark poem fantastic pen by both of you hugs 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2015 11:53:00 AM

- Shadoe, thank you for visiting, 7 and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/22/2015 3:46:00 PM

Great collab Anne....best wishes....hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2015 2:51:00 AM

- Joseph, thank you for visiting and great comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2015 9:37:00 AM

You and Liam have done an amazing job!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2015 11:54:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and great comments, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2015 3:39:00 PM

Fate can be harsh and cruel, and yet hope is the last thing to die. You two have performed well in unison; #7 Well done Anne Lise & Liam! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/22/2015 3:00:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and great comments, Paul :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/21/2015 1:06:00 PM

A fantastic collab...you two write very well together! Hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 1:18:00 PM

- Thank you for the beautiful words, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hina Nasir

Date: 1/21/2015 11:50:00 AM

THIS is so touching ... struggling life and darkness that beholds us , loved its sentiment

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 12:42:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting and great comments, Hina :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/21/2015 9:16:00 AM

a great fighting between inner consciousness and practical happenings. Here, with strong inner strength all obstacles must be made to an ant being as an elephant. Never feel upset go ahead with true spirit, it may take time but victory is sure if with God always. Loved your great poem of vision much, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 12:38:00 PM

- A fight, a big fight my friend Bl - Thank you for visiting and great comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 8:08:00 AM

Hands are not chained but mind is unclear -----self-induced slavery, our existence. Anne-Lise /Liam Love>RAJAT

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 8:44:00 AM

- A sense of failure, find no solution ... - Rajat, thank you for visiting and lovely comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/21/2015 5:30:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, Liam and Anne-Lise, I see your poetic love affair has bloomed to an astonishing level! Marvelously done! A seven to each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 12:33:00 PM

- Dear friend Demetrios, I understood what you meant - (but maybe others did not understand) - If anyone would think otherwise ...... it would not BE YOU !!!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/21/2015 9:30:00 AM

"My dear the expression refers " To the realm of poetry that bounds your souls, it doesn't refer to any carnal affair! Sorry you took it the wrong way! I am the last person on earth that would think otherwise!"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 8:24:00 AM

- "Poetic love affair" ...... but it is not a secret :))) - my husband read what we write :))) - Thank you for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/20/2015 10:37:00 PM

Hi Liam & Anne-Lise! This is a very powerful collaboration between the two of you! Wow! Very deep and intense pens here my dearest friends Liam and Anne-Lise! Very sad but great written stuff right from the very heart and soul.A 7 +++ For each of you! As always you two have golden pens!.smiling.I wish you both a very lovely day! God bless you and all His angels from heaven protect you against any evil! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxoxxoxxx D. ^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:29:00 AM

- Dorian a big thank you from both Liam and me! - Always nice with feedback on what we write! - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 1/20/2015 6:15:00 PM

Good collaboration between you an old friend Liam!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:22:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Ken - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

Date: 1/20/2015 5:16:00 PM

Another powerful piece . . . . an awesome finish with a big wise ending! Lovely dear friends. 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:22:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting, lovely comments and a 7, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2015 5:10:00 PM

deep dark imagery Anne Lise and Liam - I found this so so chilling - awesome write my friends - a 7 hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:20:00 AM

- Jan, thanks for visiting, 7 and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/20/2015 5:06:00 PM

have to say your words really blew this anne lise golden a great pleasure writing this piece with you pal also thank you both for the smiling beautiful comments deeply appreciates

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:18:00 AM

- A poem that came "blowing with the wind" - A pleasure to write with you, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/20/2015 3:32:00 PM

A beautiful piece you two...hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:12:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Tim - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/20/2015 3:17:00 PM

I am in awe of the imagery it creates such a dark mood "of eternity madness", "choked dreams" words conveying dispair and such loss. it is a brilliant write. into my favourites. love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2015 3:11:00 AM

- Shane, thanks for visiting,"fav" and lovely comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)