Home » Poems » Anne-Lise Andresen » - Goodbye My Friend -

- Goodbye My Friend -

- I sent you a warm summer smile with the sun - But you did not receive - I sent you sweet little kisses with the wind - But they did not reach to you - I sent you warm thoughts on a dusty country road - But the thoughts was gone by the dust - I sent you my tears with the waves - But you could not see them - I sent you my weeping heart - But you did not know - I sent you a hundred deep red roses - But you had traveled your own way 20.07.2013 A-L Andresen :)

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Diana Freiwald

Date: 9/17/2013 2:10:00 PM

Nice :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2013 8:50:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Diana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Soler

Date: 8/23/2013 10:48:00 AM

"Wow! this is so lovely and so touching...i love this poem and the way you have penned it down so perfectly...love jessica"

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/23/2013 11:08:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jessica. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Aiden Asoll

Date: 8/21/2013 3:34:00 PM

Hey, I read through a quick few of your poems and this one really stands out to me as well written, clearly got a lot of meaning in it too

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/22/2013 1:35:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Aiden. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson

Date: 8/19/2013 2:03:00 PM

Hello, A sweet poem tinged with sadness. Well written. Kind wishes Linda x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2013 2:27:00 PM

- Thank you for taking time to read my poem, Nice With a comments from you Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Saanvi Dua

Date: 8/13/2013 1:33:00 PM

oh ! one day , he will truly receive the love ! enjoyed stopping by ! love , Saanvi :p

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 2:06:00 PM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Saanvi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/13/2013 11:56:00 AM

I loved how this one was written... and the thoughts...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2013 12:08:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and your kind comments Carol, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Patrick Farley Iv

Date: 8/5/2013 5:25:00 PM

Heart warming write. I absolutely loved the compassion felt in this poem -Patrick Farley IV

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2013 1:51:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Patrick.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/3/2013 8:05:00 AM

Saying good by to. Friend is very hard, we do suffer a separation grief, good friends are hard to find, when we find a true friend stick like glue, great write, blessings sueellen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2013 12:11:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Sue-Ellen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jacob Owusu Sarfo

Date: 8/2/2013 1:32:00 PM

nice one, I like the passion

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2013 1:33:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2013 1:33:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jacob. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/2/2013 1:20:00 PM

Losing a friend is always sad Anne Lise but never give up hope, very lovely write. Take care, Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/2/2013 1:34:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dipika Syngai

Date: 8/1/2013 6:00:00 AM

Sad...missing someone is not the best feeling in the world :( Wonderfully written words! Keep it up! xoxo Dipika

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2013 1:28:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Dipika. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/28/2013 7:33:00 AM

Anne Lise My gosh. So sad your poem in such simplicity. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/30/2013 9:35:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Kathryn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jon Arno

Date: 7/25/2013 5:38:00 PM

Powerful words testifying of two hearts that just could not connect. Best regards Jon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/26/2013 2:34:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and your comments, Jon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Betty Bateson

Date: 7/25/2013 12:50:00 PM

So sad and yet so beautiful. Lovely. Betty

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 1:00:00 PM

- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Betty. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2013 11:19:00 AM

wow so poignant and lovely so glad i read this today ty Shadow x smiles(7)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 11:46:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Shadow, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/25/2013 10:26:00 AM

Wow!!!!!!!! This is very touching very good poem poet

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 11:46:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Sean, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 7/25/2013 5:10:00 AM

Touching, often than not , i feel that way sometimes. way to sum it up Anne. What a gem of a write. *smiles* Ron

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 5:11:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Ronny, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson

Date: 7/25/2013 4:49:00 AM

keep trying babe it will happen xox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 4:50:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Don, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/24/2013 9:33:00 PM

Very deeply touching!!!! So many can relate to these words,,,, thankyou4sharing Anne...blessingsxx cherie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 2:19:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments Cherie - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/24/2013 8:33:00 PM

This is so beautiful that it touches the heart. We can only do so much before we let friends go. We can reach but if they do not reach back all we can do is say we tried. Wonderful poem Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2013 2:18:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and comments Phyllis - welcome back whenever you want it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Paul Martinez

Date: 7/24/2013 3:21:00 PM

Im a young man with alot of heart..ive lost a few friends and this definitely touches me..very beautiful poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 3:28:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Paul, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))))

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/24/2013 7:42:00 AM

How sad!!! I hope this doesnt come from the real event, Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 8:13:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and comment Dinda, much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/24/2013 12:21:00 AM

Oh this poem saddens me so....It is hard to even wish you a Happy Birthday on it! Sorry I haven't been around in a while to read your writes. Been really busy trying to catch up with everything going on in life. But I will catch up eventually. Happy Birthday my f.e.f I hope it was beautiful. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 3:41:00 AM

- Do not be sad ... it is "just" a poem ... Thanks for the congratulations on my B-day, dear friend Dan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/23/2013 4:23:00 PM

Good morning my dearest friend Anne Lise! And Happy, happy birthday!!! I was trying to stop by last night to post a poem for you but we'd thunder storm here so, I thought of waking up early and posting it now. I hope you'll go and read it and i hope, you'll like it as well. About your poem, it's beautifully sad and great! I hope it's only a poem. Again, have a happy happy birthday! Big big hugs to you & wish you all the best. Love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2013 3:38:00 AM

- Dear sweet, kind, thoughtful, loving and good friend Leonora! - You have a heart that "pumps" out gold!! - I LOVE IT!! - I thank you with all my heart, the poem I'll always take care of. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/23/2013 12:30:00 PM

This is very nice, but sad. It is always sad when you lose a friend, or when they leave. Hope it's just a poem.. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2013 12:32:00 PM

...."just a poem", Lucilla. - Thanks for your visit and comment , much appreciated! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)