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- Delicate Balance, Divine and Fragile -

Always inside living thoughts Once held a vision adoring thee Beholding beams though these eyes Star spangled one look totally breathless This heart's calling your name precious Together uniting strengths join within power Making hopes and dreams come alive Saying onto myself breathtakingly gorgeous Adding this truly wonderful music Into the soul princess cut deeply singing tunes develop In every echo out of this world I wish to retake the perfect soft breath held Melting golden feelings burning gasps warmly sigh Why do I love you so Wearing the glass slippers Fragile as a newborn butterfly taking flight In all the flowers freshly plucked Standing out most beautiful A diamond rose stunning dewdrops sparkle Touching, kissing, loving you forever more Holding someone special always showing them how deeply appreciated they are Fireworks display our passion to share in a world filled promise Conveying the love inside each tiny seed picking you one precious gem Your words are sparkling wine your presence divine Your beauty makes me comfortable dizzy Intoxicating drunken in anything you wish becomes the soul command In the distance ~ the dying sun forever sleeps with you one dream obeys A Collaborated Poem 07.11.2015 Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Date: 11/27/2015 11:31:00 AM
Anne Lise and Liam what a beautiful piece you have penned. Love it. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2015 12:35:00 PM
- Many thanks, dear Phyllis - Nice that you enjoyed it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/22/2015 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Richard on Poem of the Week.well deserved
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Date: 11/22/2015 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this high honor
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 7:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Tim : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2015 10:51:00 PM
Congratulation on this brilliant collaboration being honored as POTW! Pandita
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 7:22:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Pandita : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2015 1:26:00 PM
Wonderfully penned. togetherness as gem. Two poets inspiring one... and all.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/22/2015 7:24:00 AM
- Iris, many thanks for comment on our poem : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2015 8:11:00 AM
a beautiful and intoxicating write -- what a great way to start my day! You all are amazing!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2015 1:01:00 PM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, David : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2015 8:10:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam! Wow! Congratulations to you both on POTW! A very beautiful collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Very beautiful:) Just awesome! Oh, how I wish I've come to congratulate you before today but I just found out about it this morning.I'm so very happy for you guys!You both deserve it for sure.Wishing you both a very lovely weekend.In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2015 1:00:00 PM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Dorian : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2015 1:50:00 PM
Another deserved win for POTW, Anne and Liam. There must be a kind of New Year celebration in every heart that loves, eh? :-)Congrats! hugs to you both!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2015 1:59:00 PM
- Wish life was a party :) - Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, dear Kim : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2015 10:51:00 AM
Anne-Lise and Liam, congratulations on having this beautiful collaboration write selected as Poem of The Week, enjoy the honor ~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 11:50:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, B.W. : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2015 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on making Poem of the Week!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 11:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Sarita : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 9:56:00 PM
Congrats on another great collaboration and on poem of the week! Well done!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Casarah : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 4:29:00 PM
another delightful poem for your golden pens - congrats Anne Lie and Liam on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Jan : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 2:25:00 PM
Hey Anne-Lise, a warm and hearty congratulations to you and Liam for your exquisite love poem being chosen for POTW!! Absolutely amazing collaboration from the two of you and a well deserved honor! Be Blessed, Neva
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Neva : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 1:05:00 PM
A beautiful, magical love story...congrats to both of you on TPOW with this lovely collaboration! Hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Rhonda : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful. And congrats on you POTW.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Marilyn : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2015 12:22:00 AM
You two are amazing!!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:57:00 AM
- Many thanks, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2015 10:33:00 PM
A nice one worthy of its placement, congrats Anne...hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Kayod5 : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2015 6:30:00 PM
smiling from ear to ear anne lise congratulations your pen splashed the gold in this dear pal also thank you everyone for the heartfelt amazing comments also sorry i am not around as much life
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:56:00 AM
- My thoughts and hearts are with you, dear friend Liam <3
Date: 11/15/2015 5:04:00 PM
Loved this one, Anne! Wonderful use of expression and vocabulary!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:57:00 AM
- Many thanks, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2015 2:12:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and Liam on the POTW honor here!! A most excellent write and collaborated effort here for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/15/2015 3:15:00 PM
I've already been in touch with him Anne-Lise and gave him your greetings. Again, great work by the both of you on this most wonderful poem!! Cheers, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 2:59:00 PM
- Hope you're talking to Liam today - Say hello from me :) - Many thanks for congratulations on our poem, Gary : - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2015 8:16:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise: A beautiful collaboration of Love.
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Date: 11/15/2015 8:15:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise: A beautiful collaboration of Love.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 2:57:00 PM
- Many thanks for congratulations on Liam's and my poem: - Delicate Balance, Divine And Fragile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2015 6:22:00 AM
A very beautiful and worthy winner. Congratulations to you both.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 7:08:00 AM
- It's big, I do not dream about money or gold :))) - Thank you kindly, Lin :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 7:05:00 AM
- Sorry ...... WOOOOOW .... Poem of the Week !!!! - Nice surprise !!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2015 7:05:00 AM
oh not much... Just Poem of the Week!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 7:02:00 AM
- Thanks, Lin ..... but what have we won?
Date: 11/14/2015 8:18:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, A marvelous and quite emotive co-authored work here by you and Liam!! A magical poem indeed by you two with palpable and passionate imagery. A "7" + FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Always a pleasure to co- write with Liam (and you) ..... poems we have together has a very special place in my heart - Many thanks for beautiful comments + fav. - I love your "Golden Book", dear Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/12/2015 7:41:00 AM
Great title, fantastic romantic poem you guys created together! A7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/12/2015 2:10:00 PM
- Robert, thanks for the beautiful words, a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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