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When the rose is complete Remember the love that this rose gives Together we'll drink from crystal fountains The light of dawn begins to shine Translucent bits of ivory joy * * )* (*((@ ))*) *(* * - 28.01.2015 - A-L Andresen :) - Inspired by a rose I received in my mailbox this week :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 2/25/2015 8:24:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise, In reply to yours of 8:11 AM... You are very welcome. Thanks for your permission to use "crystal fountains" in one of my poems. Hugs, Alicia, xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 8:04:00 AM
"Crystal fountains" is excellent phraseology. Do you mind if I use it in one of my poems? Hugs, Alicia, xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 8:11:00 AM
- I do not own the words, Alicia :) ..... I share them with you :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/17/2015 6:04:00 PM
Give me a simple Rose, is the perfect name of this Simple yet relaxing poem
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Date: 2/18/2015 2:06:00 AM
- David, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2015 2:19:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise. This is a beautiful rose you have written about. It's complexity and simplicity written into 5 inspiring lines. Like the rose you have given us many heartfelt petals and this is another. such a pleasure to read this 7 my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 2/14/2015 7:19:00 AM
- Robert, thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2015 7:03:00 AM
Anne-Lise this is beautiful and elegant just like a rose. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks Janet
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Date: 2/10/2015 7:54:00 AM
- Janet, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/7/2015 12:56:00 PM
Inspiring words about beauty and about giving! Five lines of elegance and grace, so like the beauty of a rose. This is a very solid 7 my friend, enjoyed reading this gem and adding this to my fav list. Thanks..
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Date: 2/7/2015 1:43:00 PM
- Robert, I am very grateful for your lovely visit, a 7 and a fav. to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2015 7:20:00 AM
You write graciously and wonderfully. Its blissful coming across this piece. There's nothing more than I can say other than, this is simply awesome and great
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Date: 2/6/2015 11:47:00 AM
- Funom, thanks for the nice visit and beautiful comments - Happy weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/3/2015 7:53:00 AM
Simply magical! I receive such joy reading your words.
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:09:00 AM
- Glad you liked it, Monterey :) - I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/1/2015 4:51:00 PM
Wow I love how you made that rose so creative. light & Love
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Date: 2/2/2015 3:05:00 AM
- Debbie, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 12:29:00 PM
Lovely poem; beautiful images; thanks for your encouragement. Carol
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:32:00 PM
- Glad you liked it, Carol :) - I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 7:33:00 AM
Ahh!!..Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, right now the heat of summer seems to have gone forever..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:07:00 AM
.... but, spring will come dear Sara .... I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 2:27:00 PM
Simply beautiful Anne Lise, I so love Roses, and writing about them, hugs always, James :) xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:56:00 PM
that was one gorgeous and inspirational rose that inspired this gem!!
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:32:00 PM
- Roses are always beautiful and has many languages - I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem, Andrea - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 1:37:00 PM
One rose is enough to inspire a lovely and artistic poem, Anne Lise! ... especially if it's been sent by a mysterious hand! #7 hugs /x/ paul
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:38:00 PM
- I'd rather have a single rose than diamonds around my neck .... diamonds are so heavy :) - Paul, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 10:33:00 AM
This rose is complete--remember. Thanks Anne-Lise for this gift. Love>rajat
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:40:00 AM
- Rajat, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 8:12:00 AM
Such a beauty Anne Lise, lovely poem and what a nice surprise in your mailbox :) love and hugs Wilma xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:30:00 AM
- Wilma, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 7:42:00 AM
I really prefer one single long stem flower than a bouquet.. :) beautiful Anne Lise.. hugs.. xoxo.. :)//olive eloisa
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:29:00 AM
- Liam, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:28:00 AM
- Me too :) - Olive, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 5:22:00 AM
a truly beautiful rose anne lise draws the deep beauty within golden pen dear pal wishing you a great weekend
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:29:00 AM
- Liam, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 5:06:00 AM
Beautiful!!
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Date: 1/29/2015 5:52:00 AM
- Kash, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/29/2015 3:35:00 AM
We should all receive roses for to be inspired to write such fantastic verse as this, dear Anne-Lise!
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Date: 1/29/2015 4:10:00 AM
- Demetrios thanks for the rose, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2015 8:51:00 PM
My you always be inspired for your words sing praises that enliven my heart! 7
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Date: 1/29/2015 4:08:00 AM
- David, I am very grateful for your kind visit, a 7 to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2015 5:36:00 PM
Elegant, gentle words Anne Lise, so delicately penned. A beautiful write. A 7 and into my favourites. Love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/28/2015 7:00:00 PM
- Shane, I am very grateful for your kind visit, a 7 and a fav. to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2015 5:20:00 PM
Oh Anne Lise, BRAVO I give thee a seven for this the simple rose, cheri just beautiful my dearest of friends, beautiful.
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Date: 1/28/2015 6:59:00 PM
- Cherl, I am very grateful for your kind visit and a 7 to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2015 4:24:00 PM
Ahhh . . . What a nice thing to receive . . A rose . . . Your sentiments are just wonderful . . .
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Date: 1/28/2015 4:33:00 PM
- Jerry, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/28/2015 2:13:00 PM
more bouquets of roses for a wonderful woman like you, anne... what a superb piece!.. smiley day day to you.. huggs
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Date: 1/28/2015 2:49:00 PM
- Nette, I am very grateful for your kind visit to my poem: - Give Me A Simple Rose - // Anne-Lise :)
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