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Hills come alive with sweet sounds of birds whistling tunes Filled with harmonious peace, you sail within time Gentle whispering winds through branches of trees call When you dare to take the first step forward Everything feels so easy embracing such beauty Mixing voices of nature talk deeply flowering Thrown into the unknown life is truly magical A universe inside feelings explode in one gift The soul eclipsing delight warmed with sunshine rays Like a virgin being on guard of the tiger claws, lions, bears and snakes Only when your starlight kisses clouds evaporate Time continues and the butterfly waltzes freely once more Crossing paths in this journey new beginnings grow Small wild strawberries threaded upon a stem beg to taste Opening one gateway within thoughts Setting sail into another world beyond With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength A cool breeze says goodbye upon your cheek Loving spices land this boat on paradise sands where gold sparkles warm beams When we meet at Heaven's gate batting lashes close entering a doorway into a dream Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 05.09.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/21/2015 3:51:00 PM
Stunning Liam ! Your pen flows with beautiful descriptions. "Setting sail into another world beyond With you salt of the ocean waves rise and fall Upon rocks kissing pillar of strength ...." Love that #7 ~~X~~
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Date: 9/13/2015 2:44:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A very beautiful love poem collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)You both deserve it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:28:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS ON OUR P.O.T.W., LIAM !!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2015 4:39:00 AM
A harmonious and ecstatic poem of beauty! Excellent, dear Liam!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:14:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise !Another very beautiful romantic,captivating love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.A true gem! Excellent imagery!Just wonderful.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful romantic dreamy enchanting, sweet love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just awesome!I love it!Great collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden.A 7 to each!A Fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:13:00 PM
Your pens continue to flow with golden lines of beautiful imagery Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2015 12:47:00 PM
- Always a pleasure to share words and thoughts with you dear Liam - I wish you a wonderful weekend .... relax and enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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