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- a Meeting With a Ghost - 1973 -

Several years of my childhood I spent with my aunt and uncle who lived in an old rectory in Northern Norway It was a hard time, much work, little food never time for play or entertainment My aunt and uncle were strict, we had to work for food When I had some time to myself, I spent time at the old church yard or in the woods close by - No other children to talk with therefore I spoke loudly to myself The old church yard was my secret world Old gravestones that were far over a hundred years old People who were forgotten long ago, no flowers on the graves The man who we called "Gravedigger", was always serious and rarely smiled but he was always kind and often had time for a little chat Earth was sunk and often I found bones, buttons or needles on the ground "Gravedigger" said always put them back in the ground and I did as he said One day I found a shiny white incisor I didnt put the the tooth back into the soil - I took it home with me This happened in the fall and it was dark early It was dark in the castle room at the rectory I did not dare to light the candle It was my work to rekindle the fire As I fumbled my way after the wood I suddenly felt like a light stroke on my head - looked around me and listening I whispered "is there anyone here?" ..... No sound, no answer In silence I sat ... suddenly felt someone stroking my hair through Ice cold fingers which had a nasty smell Now I was really scared I hurried in from the woodshed with wood and fired up in the fireplace Stuffed my hands in the pockets it was still so cold There .... I felt the tooth from the cemetery Looked at it from the fireplace light A powerful knock on the windowpane I turned to see You will not believe what I saw A face pressed against the window, a face that I had never seen before He had red hair and lots of beard The face scared me ... He started to laugh a scary laughter with open mouth Now I could see ... he lacked an incisor I walked a little closer to the window, but then the face in the window diseappered I felt I had done something wrong Decided to go back to the graveyard with the tooth The darkness and the fear took me as I approached the gate The laughter came back, he stood there waiting for me I placed the tooth gently down at the gate He just looked at me and laughed again the frightening laughter It is many years since this happened to me but I remember it like it was yesterday One autumn night many years after I awoke with a cold hand on my forehead I heard the laughter, saw his face and red hair long beard .... but he lacked no teeth - A story written by A-L Andresen 1973 :) (17.01.2015) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/20/2015 1:25:00 PM
Well, that brought out the chills down my spine! A great story, powerful and scary, too.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 1:41:00 PM
- From a small child left hand :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, M.L. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2015 1:03:00 PM
still makes me shiver with awe, anne.. a POTW choice for me.. happy day.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 1:36:00 PM
.......... so sweet you are :))) - huggs
Date: 1/20/2015 9:27:00 AM
A chilling write, Anne-Lise! I was captivated from the beginning...it reads like a true story...you could not have been very old when you wrote this great story...so scary! Hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 11:33:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Rhonda :) - .......... that time young ............. now "old" :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2015 4:42:00 AM
You deffinatly know how to grasp the reader.. Sent chills.. Love it, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:34:00 AM
- Arlene, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 9:52:00 PM
Great story, captivating from begining to end. This is really well written. This exposes one of your strengths that I had not experienced before.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 3:57:00 AM
- Old memory from my school time, I enjoyed writing short stories .... free fantasy :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 6:54:00 PM
OK..I've got the willies now, are ya happy ! *smiles* Great share Anne Lise.....it takes a soul with character to take the time to share anothers write knowing the excitement it will cause ! Fantastico my poetic friend ! Much love...james
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:52:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, James :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 5:55:00 PM
Awesome write and share Anne..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 3:51:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Ken :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 4:21:00 PM
A harsh world of reality my friend but it is expressed and written very well, it is a great story and am grateful for the sharing, thanks for the comment on my scream poem had a bad dream last night so I awoke to write this poem, cheri
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2015 3:51:00 AM
- My poem "A Ghost" are not from reality or a dream, just pure imagination of a child's thoughts (me in 1973) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Cherl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 2:06:00 PM
Beautifully written ,thanks for sharing Anne, and much appreciated for nice comment and for visiting my page
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2015 2:39:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Fatima :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 9:50:00 AM
love the quivering feel of this haunting story, anne...epic for me.. have a great Monday!.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2015 11:16:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 8:48:00 AM
I see your talent for writing and gift of bringing images to life started for you as a child. This is a wonderful piece, made even more so by the knowledge that it was penned by one so young.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2015 11:15:00 AM
- Thank you Monterey - I found a whole book with many stories from that year, nice to read them again for me too :) - Maybe I post more in the future :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 6:06:00 AM
powerful story anne lise really top shelf excellent pen held me to the end bless you
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2015 6:36:00 AM
- From a small child hand :) - Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2015 6:01:00 AM
The physical and metaphysical world are divided by a very thin membrane, especially when young and we so innocent it is easier to pass on the other side and have a glimpse! A fascinating story that for the many is very scary. Excellent writing dear Anne-Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2015 6:34:00 AM
- I was just a kid when I wrote this, dear Demetrios - (a small "treasure" for me .... that I will share with you :)) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2015 1:14:00 PM
That would have been a scary escapade for even an adult..I enjoyed reading your prose ghost story..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2015 1:43:00 PM
- Children have vivid imagination :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Sara :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 9:55:00 PM
Wow, what a story, I am curious if you have even been back there!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2015 5:09:00 AM
- Arthur, a story I wrote for many, many years ago - Free imagination, no experience of reality - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 9:51:00 PM
This is really scary Anne..,.. You were very brave....well written
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2015 5:08:00 AM
- A story I wrote for many, many years ago - Free imagination, no experience of reality - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments,Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 12:22:00 PM
Horrifying poem it's. Your soul is nice so saved by God, I think so. Beautifully pictured the terrible happening in past childhood. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2015 12:43:00 PM
- No experience of reality, just an "old story" written far back in time - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 8:56:00 AM
This is such a well told story, I enjoyed it!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2015 12:49:00 PM
- It was nice to find my old writing from the school days in 1973 - Glad you enjoy this, Richard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 8:21:00 AM
This is wonderful Anne;how can one place the laughing man? Any way no harm was done,thanks for God's protection upon you my friend...children beware again I learn...huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2015 12:52:00 PM
- Children have vivid imagination :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kayod5 :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2015 6:30:00 AM
:) it's a good story Anne Lise.. :)! it's kinda lil scary but funny.. :)! weeeee. hugs nad hugs.. :) olive eloisa
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2015 12:55:00 PM
- I think the story deserved a place among my poems :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Olive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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