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A glowing sun ray May I dance with you tonight You are my pillar Flow easily at golden light in a gentle embrace My heart feels like vibrations of a bell The fountains mingle with tears of happiness In perfect harmony magical as the fairy power You have my heart and all of me Make the time stand still May I dance with you tonight True love full of grace 10.10.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - 1st and 3rd verse - Haiku 5-7-5 - 2nd verse - Free verse - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Heidi Sands

Date: 11/4/2016 3:32:00 PM

I like this one! Full of grace and comfort! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2016 4:21:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/21/2016 6:15:00 AM

Oh, this one is beautiful, Anne-lise:) brought a smile to my eyes, and definitely I'm ready to dance with you;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2016 7:54:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/20/2016 3:49:00 PM

Gorgeous poem, Anne-Lise. I agree w/Mohammad ... beautiful line: My heart feels like vibrations of a bell. Beautiful symmetry. Ty for the poems you emailed. I loved them all, esp. "Fear Not the Wind." You have a poetess heart. We are kindred spirit I do believe w/all my heart. Much love to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/21/2016 2:33:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and your valuable comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/16/2016 8:52:00 PM

An awesome poem Anne- Lise - very well worded as usual. A beautiful line: My heart feels like vibration of a bell. I am on poetrysoup after a long absense - May be having a writer's block. But hope to be contributing in months to come. Thanks for visiting my poem "Let there be Light" and for your gracious comments. Love - Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2016 3:54:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Mohammad :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/16/2016 5:41:00 AM

Really it is all about a gentle embrace. Well penned. A7............//hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2016 3:53:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/12/2016 10:12:00 PM

Gave me a tingle. Lovely write, Anne-Lise, beautiful. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2016 3:53:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 1:27:00 PM

Lovely Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2016 3:52:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/11/2016 6:55:00 AM

Great poem well written x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2016 7:55:00 AM

- Wendy, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/10/2016 7:12:00 PM

You poem took me on a memory of dance..thank you for that...it's heartfelt to know romance is alive and well in this world

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2016 2:59:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/10/2016 2:49:00 PM

How delightfully romantic dearest, Anne-Lise! Beautifully done! A seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 3:47:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/10/2016 2:25:00 PM

beautifully painted warm piece anne lise i pray you have a blessing of a week dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 2:37:00 PM

- Dear friend Liam, thank you for the lovely comments - enjoyable visit and for pray and blessing :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoma Em

Date: 10/10/2016 10:50:00 AM

Keep the dance steps spinning. Very good stuff!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 2:26:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Rhoma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2016 9:20:00 AM

A very romantic piece A-L..a perfect dance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 12:16:00 PM

- Tim, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2016 8:50:00 AM

ohh, you pirouette with such flair, anne..dance away!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 11:44:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/10/2016 8:39:00 AM

I'd love to dance with you Anne- Lise. Very beautiful and romantic poem:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 2:41:00 PM

- Daniel, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/10/2016 8:05:00 AM

Quite lovely and romantic ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 12:31:00 PM

- CayCay, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2016 7:28:00 AM

Such a beautiful and melodic piece. This felt soft and was so very alluring. Nicely expressed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 12:17:00 PM

- Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2016 6:13:00 AM

your beautiful words dance on the page Anne lise:-) have a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2016 11:44:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely comments a 7 and enjoyable visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)