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- Wishing Well -

If only I could have seen tomorrow A sunny day that takes away my tears Guide my thoughts into something supernatural I bow my head in silence and simplicity Always and forever I'll be strong I wish I could just rewind time Maybe one day we meet tomorrow Try and forget the time that we lost A new time gleaming without darkness and teary eyes I wished upon a star and my dreams came true 12.02.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Bl Devnath

Date: 2/15/2015 12:21:00 PM

Beautiful poem where last two lines are really gleaming. God bless you always, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2015 12:27:00 PM

- Bl, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/14/2015 10:24:00 PM

Excellent. As usual ell penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs. Happy valentines day. Hugs and kisses.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2015 6:00:00 AM

- Thanks Ravi, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/14/2015 8:11:00 PM

Happy Valentines Day, my dear friend I wish I had more time to comment but I have to get up at 5 am, but I just wanted to wish you a wonderful day, cheri

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/15/2015 5:59:00 AM

- Cherl, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/14/2015 2:51:00 PM

An awesome pen my friend.. a 7 from me.. wish you a great weekend... lov n hugs, nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 2:55:00 PM

- Thanks Nadiya, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/14/2015 12:27:00 PM

outstanding piece anne lise just wrote one myself great minds think alike wishing you a great valentines day with all the trimmings it brings excellent pen dear pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 1:03:00 PM

- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/14/2015 7:20:00 AM

This is simply beautiful. A fantastic read to start my morning.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 1:02:00 PM

- Thanks Monterey, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/14/2015 5:46:00 AM

so devastatingly beautiful, dear anne... I was blown away.. hope valentine's will be a great one,, happy hearts day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 1:02:00 PM

- Nette, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/13/2015 6:55:00 PM

It is a beautiful poem Anne Lise, would that all love could be found early in our lives but that is not to be. Sometimes tears and darkness are needed to prepare the earth for loves seeds to burst forth. I still do "wish upon a star for my dreams to come true" thank you for posting these wonderful words. Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 7:26:00 AM

- Shane, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/13/2015 3:55:00 PM

How often we may wish to rewind time! ..to undo what went wrong, or to get what we wished for. Positivity is the way forward. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 7:25:00 AM

- Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/13/2015 10:20:00 AM

An interesting prospective on how sometimes life seems so non-responsive to our needs and we drift into dreams that come true and all changes. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2015 7:24:00 AM

- Thanks Emile, for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)